Perhaps, few subjects are as controversial as a comparison between the past values with the contemporary moral concepts. There has been a perception that old days people were concerned, more than contemporary generations, with the volunteerism activities. While I believe it can not be generalized to all cases, I tend to agree with a growing tendency toward egoism based on the following concerns in an overall view.
The first thing that springs to mind is that youngsters have involved in a busier lifestyle. In fact, due to the fast pace of life, people should work harder and for a longer time to overcome their financial obstacles. In the past, people lived in the society which working cooperatively and tasks allocation allowed them to have more leisure time. However, changes result from the competitive labor markets and fears of losing job have made people more involve in compulsory tasks which, not surprisingly, they do not have enough time to take part in charities done.
Needless to say, there is a surging trend which youngsters have the inclination to be more self-centered. In the past, informal community and family cohesion were regarded as the most important term that people always turned into them if they encountered with both emotional and monetary problems. However, with the advent of materialism concepts, people become more greed to benefit only themselves instead of being solidarity. The obvious example of this trend can be those producers who allure people with an inaccurate account of information about their outcomes to gain a higher profit margin. Admittedly, individuals are indifferent to others' interests and meanwhile, their relationship become transient and superficial not only with their peers but also with community and its related issue.
Despite the decline in volunteerism, some roles of government in young population's encouragement to participate them in the altruistic movement should not be overlooked. Compared to the past, people have a deep understanding of different communal subjects like air pollution, global warming, and green environment. In this regard, there has been a wide range of campaigns which beneficently have performed to combat these necessary topics. However, growing population requires more and effective people's intervention to be considered as a satisfactory level of altruism.
From what have been discussed, people's apathy toward community is one of the most conspicuous trends in the 21th century. As it was mentioned, not only lack of time spare time but also change in youngsters' characteristic are liable for young people disinclination toward being a volunteer to society's problem. However, in order to keep pace with a high demand for altruism, the government need to take serious steps.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'populations'' or 'population's'?
Suggestion: populations'; population's
...rism, some roles of government in young populations encouragement to participate them in th...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'while', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244813278008 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.153526970954 0.158761421928 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.118257261411 0.0866891130778 136% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0539419087137 0.046263068375 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0311203319502 0.0685040099705 45% => OK
Prepositions: 0.120331950207 0.118717715034 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0477178423237 0.0351676179071 136% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.02749368226 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0394190871369 0.0309702414327 127% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0850622406639 0.0887237588012 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00829875518672 0.0209618222197 40% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0186721991701 0.0139019557991 134% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2798.0 2387.08602151 117% => OK
No of words: 437.0 408.028673835 107% => OK
Chars per words: 6.40274599542 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.400457665904 0.338922669872 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.304347826087 0.251872472559 121% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.240274599542 0.174417080927 138% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.178489702517 0.112833075102 158% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02749368226 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.524397521467 110% => OK
Word variations: 70.6315492413 59.2087087015 119% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7278297719 48.84282405 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.263157895 120.699889404 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.473684210526 0.644075263715 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 53.4347826087 45.7405998639 117% => OK
Elegance: 1.73043478261 1.45489161554 119% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257263281487 0.300154397459 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0749046515395 0.103427244359 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.055794871174 0.0752933317313 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.526231356425 0.497263757937 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0795156805731 0.151897553556 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101530752553 0.114077575197 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041021485217 0.0781384742642 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.310933288204 0.336927656856 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0550059435655 0.067059652881 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169960227227 0.210909579961 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331431390914 0.0618886996521 54% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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