A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Animal exploitation has been one of the controversial issues that has made to the headline globally. However, majority of the people did not aware of the seriousness of this issue. In my opinion, animal exploitation should be stopped as they have their rights to be treated as humans.
On one side of the argument, most people agree on animal exploitation for the benefits of mankind. In medical perspective, animals can replace humans for clinical testing on new drugs. Therefore, humans do not need to risk their lives for an untested drugs. In addition, animal products such as leather skins are great for luxurious goods due to its durability and appearance. Besides, animal meats are a good source of protein to human. It helps to build muscle in our body and boost our immune system.
On the other hand, animal activists strongly condemn on animal cruelty due to several valid reasons. Firstly, research shows that humans are able to survive without consuming animal meats. Moreover, the protein from animal meat contains high saturated fats which will be better if it is replaced with vegetable protein such as beans. A second point is that the ecosystem and food chain have been severely damage by the interruption of humans. As a result, it leads to animal extinction or severe reduction of prey in the food chain. Lastly, animal skinning should be prohibited as it creates enormous pain to the creatures. With the technological advancements in current society, vegetable leather is as good as animal leather.
To conclude, mankind should stop all animal exploitations and cruelty to avoid imbalance ecosystem and the extinction of animals. Animals should be given the rights to live as similar to humans.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'drug'?
Suggestion: drug
...eed to risk their lives for an untested drugs. In addition, animal products such as l...
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Line 5, column 406, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'damaged'.
Suggestion: damaged
...ystem and food chain have been severely damage by the interruption of humans. As a res...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'lastly', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'in addition', 'such as', 'as a result', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.266666666667 0.247107183377 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.142857142857 0.155533422707 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.12380952381 0.0946595960268 131% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0380952380952 0.0501214627716 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0349206349206 0.0437548338989 80% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130158730159 0.122226691241 106% => OK
Participles: 0.031746031746 0.0403226058552 79% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72620279837 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0444444444444 0.0326793684256 136% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0666666666667 0.0861772015684 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0190476190476 0.021408717616 89% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00634920634921 0.011925033212 53% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1723.0 1933.35771543 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 316.048096192 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.08833922261 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.427561837456 0.374742101984 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.289752650177 0.28420135186 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.190812720848 0.203846283523 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.113074204947 0.137316102897 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72620279837 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.037074148 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579505300353 0.56093040696 103% => OK
Word variations: 61.1961394915 60.7387585426 101% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.7222222222 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.7610479958 49.517814964 44% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7222222222 127.492653851 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7222222222 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.814263465372 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 44.6974872399 49.1944974215 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.98529411765 1.69124875643 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335384312676 0.332605444948 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0882841543033 0.102741220458 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0650600237467 0.0668466124924 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.48521983003 0.534860350844 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125282331624 0.148594505496 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124821718793 0.134430193775 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747597008496 0.0742795772207 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.326205599893 0.324371583561 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0255302349979 0.0638462369009 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245704819675 0.228012699653 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493282119068 0.058150111329 85% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 10.4468937876 153% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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