The chart illustrates estimated percentage of car trips made by purpose and gender of drivers in 2005.
In 2005 car trips made by men for the purpose of work was almost 53% and by women was almost 39%. Car trips for purpose of shopping and recreation by men was approximately 10% and 12% respectively, however, car trip mad by women for purpose of shopping and recreation was almost 18% and 3% respectively.
Car trips made by men for purpose of courses, visiting town and Bank were almost 8%, 9% and 3% respectively, on the other hand, car trips made by women were almost 13%, 2% and 9%.
Car trips made for purpose of running errands and visiting friends by men were approximately 3% and 4%, on the contrary car trips made by for same purpose were approximately 10% and 8%.
In conclusion, highest number of trips made by both genders were for the purpose of work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...by women were almost 13%, 2% and 9%. Car trips made for purpose of running erran...
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Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the highest'.
Suggestion: , the highest
...roximately 10% and 8%. In conclusion, highest number of trips made by both genders we...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'in conclusion', 'of course', 'on the contrary', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.363636363636 0.268076937826 136% => OK
Verbs: 0.112299465241 0.116061578633 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0213903743316 0.0759168565197 28% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0641711229947 0.0366838410393 175% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.16577540107 0.155750635184 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0534759358289 0.0379272487307 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68046080949 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0 0.0210936926555 0% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0320855614973 0.0948980150116 34% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 875.0 1161.00487805 75% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.9 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60897435897 5.90752243213 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73763899035 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.25641025641 0.337110787985 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.211538461538 0.247514529752 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.121794871795 0.171178102325 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0769230769231 0.112407865282 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68046080949 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 63.0 106.607317073 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.403846153846 0.546246751206 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 30.5799259142 49.3433353143 62% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 8.93414634146 67% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0094962315 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6389779721 42.9750493124 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.833333333 135.714022679 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 23.0094962315 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.689975730869 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.84146341463 130% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 47.1538461538 47.7609492067 99% => OK
Elegance: 3.30303030303 2.94281807926 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324097194478 0.418131533498 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.400758167301 0.181151798455 221% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0944261998257 0.0850326197045 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.951630924094 0.706616315825 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0766968267988 0.157042692854 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.262906648513 0.228904883108 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145308455476 0.108899403657 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.476558360481 0.367819155151 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.118376155115 0.0812612215331 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27923218987 0.316326947829 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146705446274 0.0921553760075 159% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.