Todays universities not only offer classes, they provide a social environment for students to grow and thrive. There are institutes that encourage sports ans social activities as much as they advocate academic exellence. I belive that the primary focus of the collages should be education and it should recieve apt financial support, before considering spending on sports and social activities.
It is important for universities to encourange studies. By equal funding for sports, universities give a clear message to the students that sports and studies are equal. However in a university which is primarily focused on acedemic programs, this would dissuade students from spending more time in the library. For example a student who is pursuing engineering, likes playing basketball, he would be distracted from his studies, if he could find the court empty at any hour and see other people playing in it.
Classes and libraries are dynamic and constantly need to be renewed. In library it is essential to have the latest journals and editions of textbooks. In classes is it essential to keep up with the current trends like projector, smart boards, laboratories and new equipments. Where as in sports one the court is built for say tennis, or bassketball, or badminton, you only need to maintain it; there are no new investments necessary. For social activities universities can build places where people can gather in small groups or large numbers. Activities like blood donation camps, teaching the kids from neighbouring slums and helping fellow juniors can be done here. Social gatherings with aluminies, or celebrating the success of fellow batchmates can also take place in open grounds designated for such activities. This does not require large percentage of funding.
Thus classes and libraries require more funding as they are paramount to any educational institute. The funds can be balanced as and when required, but it must not be mandatory to spend half the budget on sports and social activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Thus,
...require large percentage of funding. Thus classes and libraries require more fund...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247191011236 0.229887763892 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.171348314607 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10393258427 0.0866891130778 120% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0337078651685 0.046263068375 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0421348314607 0.0685040099705 62% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109550561798 0.118717715034 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0477528089888 0.0351676179071 136% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86999074873 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0252808988764 0.0309702414327 82% => OK
Particles: 0.00280898876404 0.00188951952338 149% => OK
Determiners: 0.0589887640449 0.0887237588012 66% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0308988764045 0.0209618222197 147% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0168539325843 0.0139019557991 121% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2020.0 2387.08602151 85% => OK
No of words: 323.0 408.028673835 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.25386996904 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.40866873065 0.338922669872 121% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.321981424149 0.251872472559 128% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.232198142415 0.174417080927 133% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.15479876161 0.112833075102 137% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86999074873 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59133126935 0.524397521467 113% => OK
Word variations: 66.3844366358 59.2087087015 112% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9792776106 48.84282405 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.823529412 120.699889404 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.411764705882 0.644075263715 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 51.1981424149 45.7405998639 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.63636363636 1.45489161554 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348295139375 0.300154397459 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112388380473 0.103427244359 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0542608037489 0.0752933317313 72% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.471473569421 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132585534365 0.151897553556 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131877533908 0.114077575197 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810068713244 0.0781384742642 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.273503780848 0.336927656856 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0599570031589 0.067059652881 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253510458311 0.210909579961 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705086216063 0.0618886996521 114% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.