A/D: Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Throughout life's long and tortuous journey, our adolescence period is of utmost importance in terms of determining our personality, social status, field of work or study, and our future success and prosperity in life. Besides, with the advent of extraordinary new and innovative technologies, such as the internet, the face of our lives have became complex, and the modern life is continuously moving towards more and more complexity. Therefore, young people are required to possess numerous abilities which could pave the way for their success. In this regard, some people hold the position that having the agility to plan and organize is vital for young people in the complex modern life. As far as I'm concerned, the statement is true, for the reasons to come.
The first and the most engrossing reason is the current state of the world in terms of economic situation. As we all know, the world's population is growing at a dramatically rapid pace, and this has led to a fierce competition over decent paying job positions. Therefore, people, specially youth, in many countries just crave to find a working position. This tough and severe competitive situation require young people to equip themselves with as much knowledge, at currant information and skills as they can so they could be able to come out of this complex battle for jobs victorious. Taking this into account, young people should use their resources such as time, energy and money in the most efficient way possible to acquire a job position as fast as they can. Since the complex world of industries and corporations require professional experts nowadays, young people should be perceptive and be able to plan and organize their activities in a way that would lead them to end up as a renowned and reputed expert. Also, there are myriad universities all around the world that offer manifold courses and fields of studies. It is in the young people's best interest to plan meticulously and with utmost care to choose the best major or field of study in accordance with their talent, abilities, and their society's future needs. Managing to do so requires sufficient ability to plan and organize. For example, I am a civil engineer with a master of science in structural engineering. Upon graduation, I sat and I have to apply for a PhD program in a top U.S university, so I can return to my country as an up to date and highly knowledgeable structural engineer. Thus, I organized a step by step plan to achieve this goal. As you can see, in order to become a prosper person in the complex modern life, we have to be able to plan and organize.
Another significant factor regarding this issue is that besides the complexity in terms of economic situation, people's relationships have changed unbelievably. Thanks to the numerous social media, such as Facebook, Instagram and twitter, and the fact that the internet have facilitated people's communication tremendously, our relationships are nowadays much more complicated than in the past. We now have the chance to meet and get acquainted with numerous people from all over the world and establish relationships with them. This has complicated the process of finding friends and even spouses, because the options we have, the more it would be difficult to distinct between them and choose best of them according to our desires, beliefs and emotions. Therefore, young people should have proper planning for this issue too, since their are more influenced by their emotions. They should carefully observe with whom they are making friends for example, because they should find out other people's expectations from them. A rash and injudicious choice could bring about devastating outcomes, as we have all seen many failure in marriages which were started with an online relationship.
To sum up, the complexity of modern life requires proper planning and organizing skills for young people. Not only should they be able to plan for their future in the harsh and complex competitive world today, they also should organize their relationships with other people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 343, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...he internet, the face of our lives have became complex, and the modern life is continu...
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Line 4, column 702, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...e in the complex modern life. As far as Im concerned, the statement is true, for t...
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Line 6, column 128, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...economic situation. As we all know, the worlds population is growing at a dramaticall...
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Line 6, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...now, the worlds population is growing at a dramatically rapid pace, and this has ...
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Line 6, column 1558, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...e to apply for a PhD program in a top U.S university, so I can return to my count...
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Line 6, column 1760, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...oal. As you can see, in order to become a prosper person in the complex modern life, we h...
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Line 8, column 833, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...oper planning for this issue too, since their are more influenced by their emotions. ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'first', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'such as', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230169050715 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.135240572172 0.158761421928 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.117035110533 0.0866891130778 135% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0416124837451 0.046263068375 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0572171651495 0.0685040099705 84% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122236671001 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0273081924577 0.0351676179071 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.79186705465 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.037711313394 0.0309702414327 122% => OK
Particles: 0.00520156046814 0.00188951952338 275% => OK
Determiners: 0.0832249674902 0.0887237588012 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0208062418726 0.0209618222197 99% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00650195058518 0.0139019557991 47% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 4194.0 2387.08602151 176% => OK
No of words: 696.0 408.028673835 171% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02586206897 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.13632280105 4.48200974243 115% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.359195402299 0.338922669872 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.262931034483 0.251872472559 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185344827586 0.174417080927 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130747126437 0.112833075102 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79186705465 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 328.0 212.727598566 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471264367816 0.524397521467 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 60.1581090143 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 24.8571428571 20.5533526081 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.381154355 48.84282405 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.785714286 120.699889404 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 20.5533526081 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.392857142857 0.644075263715 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 51.1502463054 45.7405998639 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.62222222222 1.45489161554 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.53196809955 0.300154397459 177% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0990330189152 0.103427244359 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0637364099175 0.0752933317313 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.484081528157 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.183281066952 0.151897553556 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204387280789 0.114077575197 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180656571385 0.0781384742642 231% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.474769210806 0.336927656856 141% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0824772863111 0.067059652881 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.487170986451 0.210909579961 231% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.262715897495 0.0618886996521 424% => Less connections among paragraphs
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.6433691756 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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