Compared with the people who lived in cities, those who live in villages are more satisfied with their lives.
Throughout the history, cities have witnesses various kinds of alterations. Nowadays, a controversial question is according to the features of contemporary cities and villages, which one is more suitable for their residents. A plethora of people is in the conviction that big towns bring lots of facilities for the people which make them satisfied. Contrary to this popular belief, there are those who argue that the satisfaction of the rural people is due to the pure nature of the villages. I am of the opinion that, both of the mentioned points of view, have their own merits and drawbacks, and the following explanations will further elaborate on this perspective.
First and foremost, there is no denying to the fact that facilities provide convenience which is a key factor for determining the extend of satisfaction in each community. In comparison to small towns, there are a dozen of equipments in all aspect of life. For instance, there are a wide range of schools with up-to-dated education system. Undoubtedly, families prefer that their child brings up in such this circumstance. Besides, finding the appropriate job is accounted as one of the top priorities for the youths, and undoubtedly the job opportunities in big cities are more increased than the villages because of the nature of the city. There are numerous organizations and companies which are looking for the employees, however, the rural juveniles are being deprived of this chance which is the main driver of immigration of young people from villages to cities. More entertainment facilities, better public transportation and health centers are other important factors that cause urban people become satisfied with their place.
Another crucial issue that should be taken into consideration is that there are some benefits in villages which outweighed their lacks. Admittedly, the fresh air and green nature of these regions are rare recourses in big cities. Consequently, rural people are usually healthier that urban cities. There are diverse kinds of fatal diseases which air pollution is the main responsible of them. Furthermore, organic materials which have been cultivated by pure water without any chemical substances are very essential element so that some of people, who live in town, prefer to spend rest of their life in villages. In addition to this issue, the relation between the rural people is close without any jealousy. people establish their friendship based on trust, affection and generosity, whereas in big cities the good relationships is not happen regularly.
On the basis of the points mentioned above, I am convinced that neither urban settlers nor rural citizens are not completely satisfied with their situation as there are shortage in both locations. Therefore, it is highly recommended that governments equip the small towns with more facilities in order to prevent their people from running away, and also regulate some rules that control the extend of contamination in big towns.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.Use specific reasons and examples to 87
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
- TPO 32 85
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 80
- Compared with the people who lived in cities those who live in villages are more satisfied with their lives 95
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 127, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e which is a key factor for determining the extend of satisfaction in each community. In c...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 532, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the people') or simply say ''some people''.
Suggestion: some of the people; some people
...nces are very essential element so that some of people, who live in town, prefer to spend rest...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 710, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...l people is close without any jealousy. people establish their friendship based on tru...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 838, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...ig cities the good relationships is not happen regularly. On the basis of the points ...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 387, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...d also regulate some rules that control the extend of contamination in big towns.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2517.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25469728601 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89766594646 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528183716075 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 792.9 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6394277432 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.857142857 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8095238095 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262468957481 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632638521382 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484293780649 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14917121867 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164514547066 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 86.8835125448 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
---------------------
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.