Teachers' salaries should be based on the academic performance of their students.
The prompt given above looks mostly unjustified as it takes the performance of the students as the only measure to evaluate a particular teacher. While there are many reasons that can refute this argument, very few things can be said in favour of this.
The utmost reason to disagree with this claim is that, it is not only by the hard work and diligence of a teacher that is reflected in his/her student's performance, but also the sincerity and hard work of the student. If a student is not willing to excel then teacher can't make him do by the severest of the punishments. A teacher's family solely depends on his /her earnings then because of few students who are not about their studies, we can't make his/her family suffer.
Exam performances are dependent on many factors as in case of long answer writing type examinations the exam graders are not equally levelled, some expect too much while some expect little less. It is probable that sometimes even the most brilliant batch of students taught diligently by a teacher can score less due to the fact that the evaluators had higher criteria than what they expected in usual classes.
It is true that people should be evaluated constantly so as to ensure consistent positive outputs from them. We can help the cause by suggesting and implementing way better alternatives of deciding an overall performance of a teacher. For example, by using a number of valid scales like the number of classes taken by the teacher, feedback given by the student about teacher, how much the teachers helps his student with activities like quizzes, debates and also the year-wise performance graph of his students. This approach would be a holistic and more logical way of evaluation than by merely measuring the teacher's performance through his student's performance. This approach if implemented wisely, would lead to do good both for the teachers and schools/colleges as best and worst would be identified.
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- Teachers' salaries should be based on the academic performance of their students. 58
- If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable. 16
- Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.Write a response in which you discuss the ext 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sincerity and hard work of the student. If a student is not willing to excel then ...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nt is not willing to excel then teacher cant make him do by the severest of the puni...
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Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...o by the severest of the punishments. A teachers family solely depends on his /her earni...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nts who are not about their studies, we cant make his/her family suffer. Exam pe...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...t people should be evaluated constantly so as to ensure consistent positive outputs from...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...evaluation than by merely measuring the teachers performance through his students perfor...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.225071225071 0.240241500013 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.145299145299 0.157235817809 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.108262108262 0.0880659088768 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0712250712251 0.0497285424764 143% => OK
Pronouns: 0.039886039886 0.0444667217837 90% => OK
Prepositions: 0.156695156695 0.12292977631 127% => OK
Participles: 0.042735042735 0.0406280797675 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74226130112 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.017094017094 0.030933414821 55% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.111111111111 0.0997080785238 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.022792022792 0.0249443105267 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.014245014245 0.0148568991511 96% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1955.0 2732.02544248 72% => OK
No of words: 329.0 452.878318584 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94224924012 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.349544072948 0.366273622748 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.276595744681 0.280924506359 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.200607902736 0.200843997647 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106382978723 0.132149295362 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74226130112 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 219.290929204 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565349544073 0.48968727796 115% => OK
Word variations: 61.7579003416 55.4138127331 111% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6194690265 58% => OK
Sentence length: 27.4166666667 23.380412469 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4578441272 59.4972553346 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.916666667 141.124799967 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4166666667 23.380412469 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.674092028746 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 55.0762411348 51.4728631049 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.65555555556 1.64882698954 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312111767094 0.391690518653 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.132531989665 0.123202303941 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0870011829078 0.077325440228 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.569730386944 0.547984918172 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142912098159 0.149214159877 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134957359914 0.161403998019 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058818330284 0.0892212321368 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.274873024953 0.385218514788 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.023317935394 0.0692045440612 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20500480858 0.275328986314 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528602519525 0.0653680567796 81% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.