A school or college should pay its teachers at the same rate in all disciplines, regardless of differences in salaries for related fields in the world outside of school. For example, entry-level teachers in mathematics and in the arts should receive the same pay, even if outside of school, math specialists earn a much higher salary on average than do specialists in the arts.
The author in his statement argued that the payment of teacher in either school or college should be the same regardless their background field of knowledge. Simply. I cannot agree with the claim and I feel it would be more beneficial if the system of payment today remains as it is.
Enormous field of study has been taken place in our education system. There is a physics, chemistry, mathematics, biology and etc. we enrolled in a school and later college for getting an knowledge and expanding our thinking ability while we are studying, later, we enter into a university in which we master our knowledge in one aspect and get a job later on depending on the field we entered. However, before we get into such position, involving in a university depend on the effort and grade that has been acquired in high school. We all compete for having higher degree, an engineer is required a grade higher than a mathematics specialist who in turn is required a higher degree than a teacher school. We put a huge effort in getting high degrees and the effort continue with us in the university environment. Looking at mathematics specialists, of course their effort is higher than that for of those who involved in art as an example. Yet, why we are doing that much effort? The answer is to get paid more and establish a better life. Such a payment will distinguish between the different fields of study.
If two different discipline teachers would get paid the same amount of many then what would be the result. The one with higher qualification would have a feeling of unjustness and his effort has not been valued. The view of the difference between such a two disciplines would be change since they feel that no matter what is the degree of knowledge is the payment would be the same. The point here is not to ignore that the money may not be a priority for some people comparing to their interest or knowledge in the field they choose, yet the point has been developed from the material aspects only without considering other factors, this is because money represent a crucial aspects for many of us.
Therefore, it is crucial to keep the same system of payment across the different fields of teaching in schools or college for the benefit of it. If not doing do, the value and effort of those with higher education may not be valued properly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...hysics, chemistry, mathematics, biology and etc. we enrolled in a school and later colle...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... a school and later college for getting an knowledge and expanding our thinking ab...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ween the different fields of study. If two different discipline teachers would...
^^
Line 5, column 384, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ledge is the payment would be the same. The point here is not to ignore that the mo...
^^^
Line 5, column 677, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'aspect'?
Suggestion: aspect
...is is because money represent a crucial aspects for many of us. Therefore, it is cr...
^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'while', 'i feel', 'of course']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227171492205 0.240241500013 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.173719376392 0.157235817809 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0601336302895 0.0880659088768 68% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0400890868597 0.0497285424764 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0601336302895 0.0444667217837 135% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.149220489978 0.12292977631 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0623608017817 0.0406280797675 153% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.56766634065 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00890868596882 0.030933414821 29% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.120267260579 0.0997080785238 121% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0244988864143 0.0249443105267 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0155902004454 0.0148568991511 105% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2354.0 2732.02544248 86% => OK
No of words: 415.0 452.878318584 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67228915663 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.339759036145 0.366273622748 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.238554216867 0.280924506359 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.146987951807 0.200843997647 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101204819277 0.132149295362 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56766634065 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 219.290929204 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477108433735 0.48968727796 97% => OK
Word variations: 52.0635233273 55.4138127331 94% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.8421052632 23.380412469 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1877745345 59.4972553346 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.894736842 141.124799967 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8421052632 23.380412469 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.526315789474 0.674092028746 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 45.6975269499 51.4728631049 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.60162601626 1.64882698954 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.478260373694 0.391690518653 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0970759458753 0.123202303941 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0872666330273 0.077325440228 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.482815751091 0.547984918172 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.214180784883 0.149214159877 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170715547201 0.161403998019 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114273518442 0.0892212321368 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.362794681593 0.385218514788 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0932935506868 0.0692045440612 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.348235157771 0.275328986314 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276850920112 0.0653680567796 42% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.