The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Do you agree or disagree?
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that people always like to travel in different place and alleviating their stress imposed by working hours in metropolitan city. In fact, it is a holiday resort which people want to benefit from fresh air, peace and tranquility and so forth. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether travel with tour guide can be more effective or travel independently. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, to the extent that my personal perspective is concerned, if people travel autonomously, they may find themselves in trouble especially for the first time. Indeed, tour guides are experienced people and the ability to manage and handle everything that may come across. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that tour guides always make the best plans for travel and bend over backwards to held the tour in an excellent way. Scientifically speaking, they always make a sound decision and try to manage the time in order to visit better places. Arguably, if something distracted come up they are able to confront them and handle it properly. I am of the opinion that tour guide can make a time scheduling and introduce many places to the visitors and patronize people to get acquaintance with beautiful view and impressive background. Delving further into the issue reveal that travel independently may bring some trials and tribulations for people because they are not familiar with myriads of places and may divide and allocate their precious time inappropriately. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country show that tour guide provide fertile ground for people enjoy their travel because they manage time in a way that people have more time to visit extra places. Also tour guides take everything necessary into consideration in order to hold the tour greatly.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that a tour will provide an opportunity for people to make a new friends and spend their time with each other and funnier. Broadly speaking, not only can people become familiar with different people but also can enhance their social skills and learn how to interact with people in different level of society. To put it in other word, a plethora of people are not able to make a relation and how to keep in touch with other people. Indeed, not until people travel with tour can they develop their social interaction and improve their communication skills. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, many people travel in a group and many of them are in rush and may disturb trip. Actually, people travel in solitude in order to enjoy tranquility and being away from overcrowded places. In this way, travel alone can be more beneficial. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, travel in a group or independently has its own benefits and drawbacks. Contemplating all the aforementioned reasons one soon realize that tour guide can manage time better and can handle problems more effectively. In addition, tour provide fertile ground for people to improve their social relation and keep in contact with many people because vast majorities of people travel with tour that led by a tour guide.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'broadly speaking', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'by and large']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.229430379747 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.166139240506 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0886075949367 0.0866891130778 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0759493670886 0.046263068375 164% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0474683544304 0.0685040099705 69% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118670886076 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0332278481013 0.0351676179071 94% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80878438691 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0379746835443 0.0309702414327 123% => OK
Particles: 0.00316455696203 0.00188951952338 167% => OK
Determiners: 0.0632911392405 0.0887237588012 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0253164556962 0.0209618222197 121% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0142405063291 0.0139019557991 102% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3529.0 2387.08602151 148% => OK
No of words: 583.0 408.028673835 143% => OK
Chars per words: 6.05317324185 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91379618374 4.48200974243 110% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.373927958834 0.338922669872 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246998284734 0.251872472559 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.169811320755 0.174417080927 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.121783876501 0.112833075102 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80878438691 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469982847341 0.524397521467 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 56.8340939489 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 23.32 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5243514145 48.84282405 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.16 120.699889404 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.32 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.52 0.644075263715 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 48.0198284734 45.7405998639 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.31693989071 1.45489161554 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311805671503 0.300154397459 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0975402459558 0.103427244359 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0604872275752 0.0752933317313 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.468647240249 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135135374814 0.151897553556 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124287385723 0.114077575197 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675013708797 0.0781384742642 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.53499746965 0.336927656856 159% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0154684747523 0.067059652881 23% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251420497848 0.210909579961 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457378595856 0.0618886996521 74% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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