Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is considered by many that science studies need to be under the control of governments instead of organizing by personal enterprises. Personally, I totally agree with this perspective.
Admittedly, permitting personal enterprises to do science research can ease governments’ economic pressure to some extent. However, this action will also increase the risk of national security and hinder the development of societies.
Firstly, the secrets of science experiments may be exposed to the hostile countries while science investigation is commanded by private enterprises. In other words, since private companies run on the basis of profit, they may sell vital experiment data to other countries which provide them with a great deal of money. Besides, the security measures of personal enterprises may be not as perfect as what governments can supply, which may increase the risk of confidentiality revelation. As a result, allowing private enterprises to put in charge of scientific exploration is not safe.
Moreover, governments may be more willing to invest in research related to public benefits, such as environmental protection issues, than private companies. For example, there is a survey in 2015 indicated that more than 60% Chinese business companies give up the science experiments of air purification because of its low income and tough process. Compared with governments, the technology and technical information held by private enterprises are limited. Hence, governments will be more suitable to control scientific research rather than private companies.
In conclusion, after taking both reasons and effects into consideration, I believe that science research should be handed by governments. In this way, science can benefit humans and countries better.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.26821192053 0.247107183377 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.139072847682 0.155533422707 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105960264901 0.0946595960268 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.046357615894 0.0501214627716 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0198675496689 0.0437548338989 45% => OK
Prepositions: 0.14238410596 0.122226691241 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0397350993377 0.0403226058552 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.22305009217 2.80594681477 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0298013245033 0.0326793684256 91% => OK
Particles: 0.00331125827815 0.00163938923432 202% => OK
Determiners: 0.0596026490066 0.0861772015684 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0364238410596 0.021408717616 170% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00993377483444 0.011925033212 83% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1784.0 1933.35771543 92% => OK
No of words: 266.0 316.048096192 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.70676691729 6.12580529183 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.473684210526 0.374742101984 126% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.417293233083 0.28420135186 147% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.278195488722 0.203846283523 136% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.184210526316 0.137316102897 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22305009217 2.80594681477 115% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.037074148 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593984962406 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 62.5992726401 60.7387585426 103% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0578456411 49.517814964 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.428571429 127.492653851 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 0.814263465372 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 60.7293233083 49.1944974215 123% => OK
Elegance: 2.1935483871 1.69124875643 130% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335764769024 0.332605444948 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0932538157043 0.102741220458 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0638897222624 0.0668466124924 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.571315070452 0.534860350844 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.129490305816 0.148594505496 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137446706895 0.134430193775 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609266379621 0.0742795772207 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.255975437217 0.324371583561 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0597241987529 0.0638462369009 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205544986704 0.228012699653 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526820376974 0.058150111329 91% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.