The passage states that some Rembrant paintings are not really his works. In addition, it states some reasons for this concept. On the contrary, the speaker believes that these works are indeed rembrant works and he is decided to reject the reasons that are stated in the passage.
First, the passage states a fact about unreal condition of the girl in the portrait. Considering the fact that rembrant was well known artist in real painting, the luxurious dress of the girl does not show a girl who is a servant. On the other hand, according to the investigation, the speaker believe that the colors are originally true colors so that these painting belongs to the originally well known artist.
Also, the passage states the light and shadow in the evaluated portraits are not correlated. Since rembrant was a good artist in using elements in his painting, abnormal lighting conditions demonstrate unoriginality of the works. On the contrary, the speaker thinks these lighting are apparent after some post analysis and final result shows some light and shadow effects on the paintings.
Finally, the passage gives some evidence about separate parts of woods that are used in back of the paintings that are different from the original artist. The speaker rejects this belief and says that these separate parts of woods are used because of their values and the samples show the same tree is used in the other approved portrays of the rembrant.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'well', 'in addition', 'on the contrary', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247148288973 0.261695866417 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.171102661597 0.158904122519 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0836501901141 0.0723426182421 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0456273764259 0.0435111971325 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0190114068441 0.0277247811725 69% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12927756654 0.128828473217 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0532319391635 0.0370669169778 144% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.4732466474 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0114068441065 0.0208969081088 55% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.174904942966 0.128158765124 136% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0158828679856 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0152091254753 0.0114777025283 133% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1450.0 1645.83664459 88% => OK
No of words: 242.0 271.125827815 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.99173553719 6.08160592843 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.04852973271 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.359504132231 0.374372842146 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.268595041322 0.287516216867 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.190082644628 0.187439937562 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.099173553719 0.113142543107 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4732466474 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479338842975 0.539623497131 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.6586747778 53.8517498576 81% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0529801325 84% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.7502111507 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2688935945 49.3711431718 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.818181818 132.220823453 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 21.7502111507 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.909090909091 0.878197800319 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.39072847682 0% => OK
Readability: 48.8595041322 50.5018328374 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.82258064516 1.90840788429 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.532697585783 0.549887131256 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.187087344732 0.142949733639 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.104536588019 0.0787303798458 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.695875822117 0.631733273073 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153388760601 0.139662658121 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.286929137133 0.266732575781 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916253078873 0.103435571967 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.452946279618 0.414875509568 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00470708600374 0.0530846634433 9% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.401488261993 0.40443939384 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570522456059 0.0528353158467 108% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.26048565121 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.62251655629 28% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.1766004415 157% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.2958057395 97% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.