young people should be encouraged to pursue long term realistic goal rather than seek immediate fame and recognition
Here author is concern for way to get success in any field by young people and suggesting that they must be ebcouraged for long term, realistic goals rather than to
blind marethon of immediate fame recognition. Here rather than sweeping sentence i would elaborate it by adding examples.
In high and fast era of modernisation peole want to do evry thing very fast, but this is not very approach of getting success. In any field definition of success starts
with some initiatives and then endeavoor, finally it will led you to a fruitful results. If we take fanous industrialist Dhirubhai ambani as example, he had statrted
by jst petrol at pump and then he gathered knowlwdge about it's refienment and established a word's largest refienary. But is this happen in short of while?
There are other many example that shows taht to get success only always it will take time to covert your effort, hardwork and dedication in to unprecedented power
pg achieving something. Some one has great said, "to produce baby it will tkae 9 mmonths, you just can ot produce baby by pragnenting 9 woman in 1 month". So youg people
encourage for real lesson of life taher than virtualities.
Some time temptetion of short term path for success can endanger some one in big mutiny. Many young people are being traped by this enthralling ways of immediate
success.Not always time taking path are likable, But in many cases dilatiry process are not prefferable. As you want to grt survive in nwe business of some field,
then immediate influences are fruitful, because sometime people preffer first product of any thing as pristine and rest as pirated of original.
In conclusion i would add that author's point is so strong for recent generation but it is subjective also rather than any general statement. Based on vast research
it can be determine for particular field.
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- govermnment oficials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out will of the people they serve 50
- law should be flexible enough to take account of various circusmtances , times , and places 16
- young people should be encouraged to pursue long term realistic goal rather than seek immediate fame and recognition 16
- in some countries, television ad radio programs are carefully censored for offensive language and behavior. in other countries, there or no censorship 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...edented power pg achieving something. Some one has great said, 'to produce baby i...
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...mediate influences are fruitful, because sometime people preffer first product of...
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...s pirated of original. In conclusion i would add that authors point is so stro...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'in conclusion', 'in short', 'in many cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255072463768 0.240241500013 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.159420289855 0.157235817809 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.113043478261 0.0880659088768 128% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0579710144928 0.0497285424764 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0434782608696 0.0444667217837 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.144927536232 0.12292977631 118% => OK
Participles: 0.0405797101449 0.0406280797675 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74751588483 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0260869565217 0.030933414821 84% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0405797101449 0.0997080785238 41% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0260869565217 0.0249443105267 105% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00289855072464 0.0148568991511 20% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1884.0 2732.02544248 69% => OK
No of words: 315.0 452.878318584 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.98095238095 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.58838876751 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.336507936508 0.366273622748 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.257142857143 0.280924506359 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.190476190476 0.200843997647 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.126984126984 0.132149295362 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74751588483 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 219.290929204 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625396825397 0.48968727796 128% => OK
Word variations: 73.342064327 55.4138127331 132% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5 23.380412469 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2438471964 59.4972553346 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.571428571 141.124799967 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 23.380412469 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.785714285714 0.674092028746 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.94800884956 263% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.21349557522 384% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 48.2142857143 51.4728631049 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.68888888889 1.64882698954 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200561259415 0.391690518653 51% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0627994114343 0.123202303941 51% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0499520440495 0.077325440228 65% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.668993583975 0.547984918172 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.257484697341 0.149214159877 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731811892545 0.161403998019 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848612476568 0.0892212321368 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.0793661511493 0.385218514788 21% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0562954466775 0.0692045440612 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808496266365 0.275328986314 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713844082728 0.0653680567796 109% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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