Since there are many positive changes in life today, I agree with this opinion. In fact, Autonomous and efficient devices made the life more easier in large cities; besides, the transportation characteristic is different from the provious type of transportation. The social network and new comunication devices also prepare an easy way for all people around the world to speak and transfer their opinion as well as their culture.
First, advance in technology have prepared new ways for daily problems. As a matter of fact, autonomous devices are common in each home. You can see different types of furniture in each regular house that ease the type of activities. For example, you do not need to wash your clothes with your hand or use woods to prepare your meal. If you want to do complex calculations, you are able to perform those with your personal computer.
On the other hand, the transportation devices are more comfortable in comparison to my grandparents time. Now, cars are able to run faster than before with less amount of fuel that before they consumed. In addition, The airports are very popular today and airplanes are able to carry so many people to far distances. these air planes also reduces the time in transporting people. Increasing the city transporting vehicles, city managers have reduced the time in contrary to the last centuries.
The last reson is social networks and wireless comunication. Telephone and smart phones are trivial devices today and the people are able to comunicate with each other in an efficient and speedy way. In fact, People know how to use their professional devices to cooperate with each other. Despite the fact that, trivial way of comunication have prepare an efficient way in comunication in real situations, the new devices are able t reduce the intervals between people that are far from each other.
In conclusion, the new devices not only decreases the ditanece between the people in one country but also fasilitate the way that people have completed their works.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ous and efficient devices made the life more easier in large cities; besides, the transport...
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Line 5, column 318, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
... carry so many people to far distances. these air planes also reduces the time in tr...
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Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to far distances. these air planes also reduces the time in transporting people....
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Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in an efficient and speedy way. In fact, People know how to use their professiona...
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Line 7, column 347, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'prepared'.
Suggestion: prepared
... that, trivial way of comunication have prepare an efficient way in comunication in rea...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'as a matter of fact', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.266846361186 0.229887763892 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.129380053908 0.158761421928 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.123989218329 0.0866891130778 143% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0431266846361 0.046263068375 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0404312668464 0.0685040099705 59% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126684636119 0.118717715034 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0161725067385 0.0351676179071 46% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.76851577963 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0350404312668 0.0309702414327 113% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0943396226415 0.0887237588012 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00269541778976 0.0209618222197 13% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.010781671159 0.0139019557991 78% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2035.0 2387.08602151 85% => OK
No of words: 337.0 408.028673835 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03857566766 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.338278931751 0.338922669872 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.261127596439 0.251872472559 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172106824926 0.174417080927 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127596439169 0.112833075102 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76851577963 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53412462908 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 56.8740628275 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.7222222222 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3177647079 48.84282405 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.055555556 120.699889404 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7222222222 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.644075263715 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 44.8349818661 45.7405998639 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.92405063291 1.45489161554 132% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217061628047 0.300154397459 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.137419451583 0.103427244359 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0945655831915 0.0752933317313 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.531797085391 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17959776078 0.151897553556 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903485866774 0.114077575197 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623516752246 0.0781384742642 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.310568368085 0.336927656856 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0955559168903 0.067059652881 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139354898302 0.210909579961 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477828374318 0.0618886996521 77% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.