I agree with this opinion about the people. Although there are so many restriction and forbidden activities around the world, people think that these activities prevent them from truthful feeling about the life. Moreover, Those people think they feel better if they do what they want. In fact, they believe the approved enjoyment habits in the world restricts their desire in happiness. Also, they believe that there are very funny experiences that the government and the other people are not aware of it.
Firstly, the people think that they feel better if they do what they want. Despite the fact that there are a lot of rules that restricts good activities, they think those activities will not satisfy their actual desire in the society. For example, they think the life is short and they are not able to do what they want if they do what they should do. As a matter of fact, These restrictions will cause them to reduce their desire as well as their ability in the society.
Secondly, They believe the freedom in making decision needs to avoid restricting activities. For instance, these restrictions not only prevents them to do what they want but also limits their actions so that those are trivial and customary behaviors. In fact, boring and reckless, they are avoided to do their desires by trivial customs.
At last, they believe they can do what the other people are not able to do. On one hand, they want to be unique by doing special activities. On the other hand, they are able to take new experiences if they do new activities in their life. Despite some activities, that may produce unpredictable effects in their life, are very dangerous they are able to increase their skills through these activities.
In conclusion, most of us people around the world consider our desire in doing special activities rather than what the society told us to do. These activities can help us to increase our happiness as though we are the most lovely person in the earth. Also, there are a lot of rules around the worlds that are made to restrict the happiness. In fact we love to be unique and increase our experiences with doing something new.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt but also limits their actions so that those are trivial and customary behavior...
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Line 7, column 318, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uce unpredictable effects in their life, are very dangerous they are able to incr...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'as a matter of fact', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.182038834951 0.229887763892 79% => OK
Verbs: 0.174757281553 0.158761421928 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0776699029126 0.0866891130778 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0509708737864 0.046263068375 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.109223300971 0.0685040099705 159% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.128640776699 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0194174757282 0.0351676179071 55% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.42573572463 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0315533980583 0.0309702414327 102% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0825242718447 0.0887237588012 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0145631067961 0.0209618222197 69% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0242718446602 0.0139019557991 175% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2159.0 2387.08602151 90% => OK
No of words: 373.0 408.028673835 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78820375335 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.289544235925 0.338922669872 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.201072386059 0.251872472559 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.13672922252 0.174417080927 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0965147453083 0.112833075102 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42573572463 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.418230563003 0.524397521467 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.1181063607 59.2087087015 73% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.65 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9489270222 48.84282405 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.95 120.699889404 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.65 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9 0.644075263715 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 38.7572386059 45.7405998639 85% => OK
Elegance: 0.985507246377 1.45489161554 68% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275114787264 0.300154397459 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.135421856583 0.103427244359 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0864405798962 0.0752933317313 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.566724440835 0.497263757937 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.121698094575 0.151897553556 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12988060168 0.114077575197 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734871716827 0.0781384742642 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.443139165686 0.336927656856 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0986592813342 0.067059652881 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201311770817 0.210909579961 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269710245494 0.0618886996521 44% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.