The following is a memorandum from the business manager of WLSS television station.
"Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs."
The memorandum states that devoting increased time of late night programs to national news rather than weather and local news has decreased the number of viewers or has made the viewers of late night programs unhappy. but yet the survey is not complete to bolster the argument that weather and local businesses are more popular choice of viewers in late night programs.
The Author argues that most of the complaints recieved from viewers are concerned with stations coverage of weather and local news but this does not answer that how much percentage of viewers complained regarding coverage of weather and local news? Is the percentage of user complained sufficient to make conclusions that weather and local news are more popular among viewers? like if more than half of the viewers complained than it justifies the conclusion of the survey else it weakens the argument.
The Author also argues that local businesses that used to advertise during late night news programs have canceled thier advertisement contracts with telivision station.but fails to state the reason behind cancellation of advertisement contracts. the news programs could also cancel the advertisement contract if telivision station not at all shows thier advertisements of local businesses not only at late-night but also during the day. the memorandum fails to consider the situation if the telivision station promise to show the local business advertisement during the day time, the news program might be probably happy to give the advertisement contract to the telivision station.
Finally the memorandum also fails to considers the consequence that if they they restore the time devoted to the weather and local news, the more users will be attracted or not? and the local businesses will be happy to give the advertisement contracts to the telivision station and it will regain the advertisement revenues or not?.
Hence the memorandum stated by the business manager of the telivision stations makes the argument which sounds fine. But it fails to consider many of the assumptions stated above which are required to further strengthen the conclusion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...viewers of late night programs unhappy. but yet the survey is not complete to bolst...
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Line 1, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...et the survey is not complete to bolster the argument that weather and local busi...
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Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s but this does not answer that how much percentage of viewers complained regardi...
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Line 2, column 379, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Like
...al news are more popular among viewers? like if more than half of the viewers compla...
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Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ancellation of advertisement contracts. the news programs could also cancel the adv...
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Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... at late-night but also during the day. the memorandum fails to consider the situat...
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Line 4, column 2, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...t contract to the telivision station. Finally the memorandum also fails to considers ...
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Line 4, column 39, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'consider'.
Suggestion: consider
... Finally the memorandum also fails to considers the consequence that if they they resto...
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Line 4, column 73, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: they
...ls to considers the consequence that if they they restore the time devoted to the weather...
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Line 4, column 179, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...he more users will be attracted or not? and the local businesses will be happy to g...
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Line 5, column 2, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...n the advertisement revenues or not?. Hence the memorandum stated by the business m...
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Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e telivision stations makes the argument which sounds fine. But it fails to consi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'hence', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.28813559322 0.25644967241 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.158192090395 0.15541462614 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0988700564972 0.0836205057962 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.045197740113 0.0520304965353 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0169491525424 0.0272364105082 62% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121468926554 0.125424944231 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0338983050847 0.0416121511921 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82583553226 2.79052419416 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0423728813559 0.026700313972 159% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.118644067797 0.113004496875 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0141242937853 0.0255425247493 55% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0112994350282 0.0127820249294 88% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2137.0 2731.13054187 78% => OK
No of words: 339.0 446.07635468 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.30383480826 6.12365571057 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.57801047555 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.371681415929 0.378187486979 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.309734513274 0.287650121315 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.233038348083 0.208842608468 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.153392330383 0.135150697306 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82583553226 2.79052419416 101% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 207.018472906 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430678466077 0.469332199767 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.1401175157 52.1807786196 83% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.039408867 60% => OK
Sentence length: 28.25 23.2022227129 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7267533628 57.7814097925 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.083333333 141.986410481 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 23.2022227129 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.724660767414 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 3.58251231527 335% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 59.2234513274 51.9672348444 114% => OK
Elegance: 2.01282051282 1.8405768891 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.563235406564 0.441005458295 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.269447707884 0.135418324435 199% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.098095988287 0.0829849096947 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.777252218735 0.58762219726 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0754133277023 0.147661913831 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.309549488785 0.193483328276 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841062034966 0.0970749176394 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.48712719836 0.42659136922 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.10579880565 0.0774707102158 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.399192770504 0.312017818177 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553479818731 0.0698173142475 79% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.33743842365 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.87684729064 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.82512315271 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 6.46551724138 93% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 5.36822660099 93% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 14.657635468 75% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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