Discussing about the memoir created by Chevalier regarding his life and adventures, paragraph raises point about the accuracy of the memoir. Whereas, lecture states positive point about the memoir and clarify the doubts mentioned in the paragraph.
Firstly, paragraph casting doubt about the wealthy life of Chevalier which he spent in Switzerland but evidence shows that he borrowed money from the Switzerland merchant. Contrary to the opinion mentioned in the paragraph, lecture says that borrowing money does not mean that he was poor. This is correct that he had spent money in parties and gambling but he had borrowed money to sell the property. He needed money so that more money would arrive.
Secondly, paragraph raises point about the accuracy on the conversation between Chevalier and writer Voltaire. Paragraph states that it is impossible to write accurate conversation after so many years. Whereas, lecture states that Chevalier used to make notes every night about the conversations. He has referred those notes while writing about the conversation between him and writer Voltaire in the memoir.
Thirdly, paragraph depicts that story mentioned by Chevalier in memoir about the escape from the Venice prison with the help of metal piece is not accurate. Paragraph mentions that Chevalier had good political relations and he had taken support of the bribe to get out from the prison. Contrary to the point, lecture states that there were more powerful people in the prison at the time of Chevalier. It is not correct to say that Chevalier had used his friendship else other people could also escape with the help of bribe power. Lecturer supports his point with the fact that government documents show that ceiling of the prison had been repaired after the escape which shows that he had escaped from the hole in the ceiling.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...urate conversation after so many years. Whereas, lecture states that Chevalier used to ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'whereas', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.297213622291 0.261695866417 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.164086687307 0.158904122519 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0557275541796 0.0723426182421 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.030959752322 0.0435111971325 71% => OK
Pronouns: 0.046439628483 0.0277247811725 168% => OK
Prepositions: 0.160990712074 0.128828473217 125% => OK
Participles: 0.0526315789474 0.0370669169778 142% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.51507455158 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0216718266254 0.0208969081088 104% => OK
Particles: 0.0030959752322 0.00154638098197 200% => OK
Determiners: 0.102167182663 0.128158765124 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0061919504644 0.0158828679856 39% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0123839009288 0.0114777025283 108% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1838.0 1645.83664459 112% => OK
No of words: 300.0 271.125827815 111% => OK
Chars per words: 6.12666666667 6.08160592843 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.04852973271 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.366666666667 0.374372842146 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.283333333333 0.287516216867 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.206666666667 0.187439937562 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133333333333 0.113142543107 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51507455158 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 145.348785872 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47 0.539623497131 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.8817732237 53.8517498576 85% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0529801325 115% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.7502111507 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1092362858 49.3711431718 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.533333333 132.220823453 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 21.7502111507 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.866666666667 0.878197800319 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.39072847682 29% => OK
Readability: 48.3333333333 50.5018328374 96% => OK
Elegance: 2.11538461538 1.90840788429 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.749756310619 0.549887131256 136% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.166918576181 0.142949733639 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0796851971767 0.0787303798458 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.655657275001 0.631733273073 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122041583788 0.139662658121 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.36609956705 0.266732575781 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111406859755 0.103435571967 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.308824074903 0.414875509568 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0654947838911 0.0530846634433 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.548609135915 0.40443939384 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726478058987 0.0528353158467 137% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.26048565121 141% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.49668874172 143% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.1766004415 189% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.2958057395 136% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.