An idea alone, no matter how great, is meaningless unless it is put into practice.
World in which we live now would be far better if majority of people have implemented their inner thoughts. Human being has original power to change everything he wants and this power hides in his ideas. One correct action, one appropriate word can become the launch of something great, despite who said it, child or mature. However, one of the greatest faults of humanity is absence of ability to see and recognize this power, and at the same time to find an incentive for putting it into practice. The world history has many examples when the great ideas were forgotten and rejected, that became the reason of losing time and even lives.
Sometimes people surprise and cannot believe when they hear about great discoveries in the long past. Considering lack of opportunities and equipment for that time, it seems very difficult for majority of them agree with the history and regard the root of some discovery to the past. Imagine the reaction of ancient people to those novelties, if it seems unbelievable for present generation. When Aristarchus, the Greek astronomer (310 BS- 230 BS), proposed that the earth and the other planets orbit the sun, most people ignored him and continued to believe that the earth lies the center of the universe, and in contrast, everything orbits our planet. In spite of his persistence, Aristarchus’s work was forgotten for almost two millennia, the time that the science lost.
The medicine also experienced the same rejections and in comparison with astronomy, there is the two most important factors, like human health and life. Take for example the cancer, disease that gradually kill without leaving any hope. Visualize the future, when some of the current and forgotten ideas regarding treatment against cancer will be considered and implemented. Undoubtedly, it will be a great discovery, but neglecting it today already destroyed many lives. For instance, in 1850 Louis Pasteur, after the death of his three children from infection, made the discovery that disease spread by germs. Despite the fact that today a large part of medicine due to his work, he was met with violent resistance from the medical community. The idea which was neglected, derided and forgotten could save many lives and simplify the life of people.
There are many great ideas in the whole world that remained as ideas and lost their greatness and power to influence and change, and at the same time many other great ideas, which are put into practice and have become the core reason of significant changes.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'as for', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in contrast', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256355932203 0.240241500013 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.146186440678 0.157235817809 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0847457627119 0.0880659088768 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0275423728814 0.0497285424764 55% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0402542372881 0.0444667217837 91% => OK
Prepositions: 0.120762711864 0.12292977631 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0402542372881 0.0406280797675 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60184476853 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0169491525424 0.030933414821 55% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0953389830508 0.0997080785238 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0127118644068 0.0249443105267 51% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0233050847458 0.0148568991511 157% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2549.0 2732.02544248 93% => OK
No of words: 421.0 452.878318584 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.05463182898 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.327790973872 0.366273622748 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25890736342 0.280924506359 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.178147268409 0.200843997647 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133016627078 0.132149295362 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60184476853 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 219.290929204 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574821852732 0.48968727796 117% => OK
Word variations: 68.922151719 55.4138127331 124% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.3888888889 23.380412469 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1004238419 59.4972553346 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.611111111 141.124799967 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3888888889 23.380412469 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.674092028746 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 49.2796252309 51.4728631049 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.9504950495 1.64882698954 118% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0640229034501 0.391690518653 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10685201315 0.123202303941 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0585969505928 0.077325440228 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.526916972603 0.547984918172 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.179875930508 0.149214159877 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299317887015 0.161403998019 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377124574898 0.0892212321368 42% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.483127984844 0.385218514788 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.081245816717 0.0692045440612 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.055521550598 0.275328986314 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263341905428 0.0653680567796 40% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.30420353982 170% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.