Countires are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.Do you think this is a positive or a negative development.

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Countires are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development.

The world is becoming similar to a little village where anyone is able to buy a certain product from whichever place on the globe with few mouse clicks on a computer. This has made everything easier and less time consuming while people seem to be always busy these days.

International trade has allowed new types of cuisines from other countries to be introduced to the market, such as thai, chinese and mexican food in the UK. It has also made exotic goods readily available in town, meaning that you don’t have to travel all the way to Iran to get a well woven rug.

It is sometimes argued that the flood of new foreign items has made some communities lose their identity. For example the old-fashioned English breakfast is now replaced with the american cereals, burgers are now more common than fish and chips and lasagnes have made shepherd’s pie almost forgotten. However, the british were never known for cooking well and these can be viewed as an improvement to the food in our fridge.

Globalisation also facilitate exchange of knowledge making it possible to learn about other cultures and explore their past, values, beliefs and aspirations. This understanding has in its core the factors that can bring about peace among nations as violence has always been associated with ignorance and the alienation of other societies.

All in all, strengthening connections among countries is a part of our advancement as a species, therefore, it shouldn’t be taken negatively.

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Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'such as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239285714286 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.185714285714 0.155533422707 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0964285714286 0.0946595960268 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0571428571429 0.0501214627716 114% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0357142857143 0.0437548338989 82% => OK
Prepositions: 0.107142857143 0.122226691241 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0714285714286 0.0403226058552 177% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85750001252 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0357142857143 0.0326793684256 109% => OK
Particles: 0.00357142857143 0.00163938923432 218% => OK
Determiners: 0.0928571428571 0.0861772015684 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00714285714286 0.021408717616 33% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00714285714286 0.011925033212 60% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1500.0 1933.35771543 78% => OK
No of words: 248.0 316.048096192 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.04838709677 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20517956788 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326612903226 0.374742101984 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.270161290323 0.28420135186 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.181451612903 0.203846283523 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133064516129 0.137316102897 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85750001252 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.037074148 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653225806452 0.56093040696 116% => OK
Word variations: 74.1071826485 60.7387585426 122% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0891783567 62% => OK
Sentence length: 24.8 20.7743622355 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.347742673 49.517814964 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.0 127.492653851 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 20.7743622355 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9 0.814263465372 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 51.8161290323 49.1944974215 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.5 1.69124875643 89% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293004269471 0.332605444948 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0899014811208 0.102741220458 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0324861393326 0.0668466124924 49% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.666812485339 0.534860350844 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.149378405011 0.148594505496 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117252293744 0.134430193775 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056568003567 0.0742795772207 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.211912108344 0.324371583561 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0761398758502 0.0638462369009 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15681882315 0.228012699653 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734038784547 0.058150111329 126% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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