Authors suggestion to add an extra lane to reduce the traffic in rush hours is good suggestion, but there are many logical flaws in it. Authors proposals in an argument are based on assumptions and holes and does not seems cogent.
Author first says that increase in traffic during rush hours doubles the commute time. But as we know that, highway is connecting suburb areas and city center increase in traffic is obvious. However it is possible that the rush is only at particular office timings. Author needs to examine the particular duration when the rush is more. Then author talks about adding a additional to reduce the traffic. He need to think that is it viable solutions? It might possible further increase in population leads to same problem.
Author has mentioned in the argument that favored proposal is from motorist, he did not mention anything about other vehicles. One possibility is only no other vehicle is facing the problem. He has not provided any details regarding the drivers. Who are drivers? They might be employees, college students, adults. He has not mentioned cause of the traffic. It is possible that traffic is increasing because of not obeying traffic rules, for example, rush driving, frequent accidents, heavy duty vehicles.
Author then talks that last year's addition of a lane to the nearby Green Highway was followed by a worsening of traffic jams on it. Author is precluding this, he don't have any evidence for this. How is it worsen? Increase in traffic on Green Highway after addition of lane does not guarantee that it will affect the on Blue Highways.Instead my suggestion would be to divide the existing highway into separate lanes for motorist, heavy duty vehicles ,small vehicles. This will reduce the chaos on the highway. Another solution is to divert the traffic through some other route. Author did not mention that there is only one way to reach city center. Government can provide public transport or people can start car pooling to mitigate the rush, This will solve the problem within low cost.
Author at last suggest that adding a adding a bicycle lane to Blue Highway will alleviate the problem. But he did not talk about how it is going solve the problem. He is saying that many area residents are keen bicyclists, but does the highway is used by only area residents only? Residents are keen bicyclists, does not mean that they will prefer to travel by it. It is possible that people are travelling through the highways for some important purposes such as school exams, office timings. It will be difficult for people to travel back from work or school to home, after being sapped by the whole day work. It is also possible that people will use bicycle lane just to enjoy the it, which may lead to increase in traffic in bicycle lane itself. Adding extra bicycle lane might be extra overhead for maintenance.
To conclude, Authors suggestion is good but there are many flaws that would not solve the problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'seem'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: seem
...d on assumptions and holes and does not seems cogent. Author first says that incr...
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Suggestion: seem
...d on assumptions and holes and does not seems cogent. Author first says that incr...
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...se in traffic during rush hours doubles the commute time. But as we know that, highway is c...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...center increase in traffic is obvious. However it is possible that the rush is only at...
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Suggestion: Who is a are
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...ms on it. Author is precluding this, he dont have any evidence for this. How is it w...
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Suggestion: Instead,
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Suggestion: ,
... lanes for motorist, heavy duty vehicles ,small vehicles. This will reduce the cha...
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...ow cost. Author at last suggest that adding a adding a bicycle lane to Blue Highway will allev...
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Message: Did you mean 'be'?
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...e keen bicyclists, but does the highway is used by only area residents only? Resi...
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...ter being sapped by the whole day work. It is also possible that people will use b...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'for example', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275 0.25644967241 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.1875 0.15541462614 121% => OK
Adjectives: 0.075 0.0836205057962 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0428571428571 0.0520304965353 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0464285714286 0.0272364105082 170% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.105357142857 0.125424944231 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0410714285714 0.0416121511921 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.43960148453 2.79052419416 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0321428571429 0.026700313972 120% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.075 0.113004496875 66% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0285714285714 0.0255425247493 112% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0125 0.0127820249294 98% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2985.0 2731.13054187 109% => OK
No of words: 508.0 446.07635468 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87598425197 6.12365571057 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.57801047555 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.34842519685 0.378187486979 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.263779527559 0.287650121315 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.169291338583 0.208842608468 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0826771653543 0.135150697306 61% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43960148453 2.79052419416 87% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 207.018472906 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456692913386 0.469332199767 97% => OK
Word variations: 52.5838061784 52.1807786196 101% => OK
How many sentences: 33.0 20.039408867 165% => OK
Sentence length: 15.3939393939 23.2022227129 66% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4322369499 57.7814097925 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4545454545 141.986410481 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3939393939 23.2022227129 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.724660767414 46% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.14285714286 117% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 3.58251231527 475% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.7718921498 51.9672348444 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.52258064516 1.8405768891 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400113400611 0.441005458295 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105367618387 0.135418324435 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.089136013351 0.0829849096947 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.44666521537 0.58762219726 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166244445873 0.147661913831 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129292638385 0.193483328276 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785218281444 0.0970749176394 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.338721182377 0.42659136922 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0678480440148 0.0774707102158 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244577979876 0.312017818177 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799606621088 0.0698173142475 115% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.33743842365 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 6.87684729064 160% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.82512315271 187% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 6.46551724138 155% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 5.36822660099 112% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.82389162562 248% => OK
Total topic words: 23.0 14.657635468 157% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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