The percentage of over weight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years.Discuss the possible causes and effects of this disturbing trend and offer a solution.
The number of obese children are increased in day by day. It was said that the proportion of children who are overweight is peaked in to 20 percent in western world over a decade. This essay exemplifies the factors and effects of the obesity in children
There are plethora of reasons for overweight in children. Firstly, due to the consumption of unhealthy food. It in the sense, children are very fond off junk foods, because of the delicious taste. But the fast food makers use many harmful ingredients to make food more tasty. For example, many children are fascinated by the advertisements of junk food due to the attractive look of the product. So the children have a tendency to buy and eat it. Secondly, nowadays children lead a sedentary lifestyle. They have no time for outdoor games and spent more time inside the house by playing video games or watching television. By this the calories and fat that they are consumed remains in their body. Thereby they became obese.
The outcomes of obesity is vulnerable. Children are prone to chronic diseases such as blood pressure, diabetics and so on. Also obese children faces many torture in society. Not only they face physical torture but also they tortured mentally. This create stress and anxiety in children. Therefore they became less productive. To cite an example, if a child is obese, the authority do not want him to participate in any sports events, so there is a big gap is created between the child and others. It may feels them they are alone in the society.
To recapitulate, obesity creates many problems in children. So, the parents should guide and allure them to lead a good lifestyle. The good lifestyle includes them to do more outdoor activities and provide them a healthy diet.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252976190476 0.247107183377 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.151785714286 0.155533422707 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0952380952381 0.0946595960268 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0416666666667 0.0501214627716 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0505952380952 0.0437548338989 116% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119047619048 0.122226691241 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0238095238095 0.0403226058552 59% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62948101935 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0327380952381 0.0326793684256 100% => OK
Particles: 0.00297619047619 0.00163938923432 182% => OK
Determiners: 0.0982142857143 0.0861772015684 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00595238095238 0.021408717616 28% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00297619047619 0.011925033212 25% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1760.0 1933.35771543 91% => OK
No of words: 302.0 316.048096192 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82781456954 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.341059602649 0.374742101984 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.284768211921 0.28420135186 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.192052980132 0.203846283523 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102649006623 0.137316102897 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62948101935 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.037074148 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556291390728 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 58.4114814489 60.7387585426 96% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0891783567 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.1304347826 20.7743622355 63% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4663769525 49.517814964 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5217391304 127.492653851 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1304347826 20.7743622355 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.565217391304 0.814263465372 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 41.6072559747 49.1944974215 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.62195121951 1.69124875643 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426174512657 0.332605444948 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0862717168253 0.102741220458 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0926373360142 0.0668466124924 139% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.434185038788 0.534860350844 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.176836669123 0.148594505496 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14876811933 0.134430193775 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101176652971 0.0742795772207 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.372700021099 0.324371583561 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0919850086734 0.0638462369009 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306137286643 0.228012699653 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116230918895 0.058150111329 200% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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