Everyone should contribute to their communities, I am of opinion that, now a days young people do not give
their contribution for helping communities. There are couple of reasons for, they are busy with their
life, they lose touch with their communities and they get caught in meeting their daily needs.
To begin with, everyone is busy with their own life. With increase in expectation at every step in
life I think you get so busy fullfillng those, and gets hardly any time to do any activity for community.
I feel lot about doing good work for my community but I am always busy with my job on weekdays
that it takes my entire day and when I come home I am tired to dead to think about anything else but sleep and relax.
Next thing, lose touch with your community people. Even if you have some time to contribute on weekends, you have to have
contacts with community people to start any work for them but with todays busy life style you lose touch and then it gets difficult
to connect. My friend he want to do contribute for his school but now after so many years of not being in touch with them he doesn't know
how to find school network and connect right person from school to proceed with his plan.
Moreover, most of us busy meeting our daily needs. With increase in prices for houses, food and households items, everyone is busy paying for those. I see many of my friends busy paying emi for their houses, getting rid off their tution loans or getting themselves new car.
You get caught in meeting your needs, meeting family's needs and gets no time to put for contribution for your community.
To sum up, all reasons that I discussed above I believe young people todays have no time to contribute to their communities. Even if some gets time
at the very late stage in their life by that time they have lost touch with necessary network.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...heir communities, I am of opinion that, now a days young people do not give their contrib...
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Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... communities, I am of opinion that, now a days young people do not give their contrib...
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Line 13, column 26, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...ets difficult to connect. My friend he want to do contribute for his school but now...
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Line 13, column 126, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ears of not being in touch with them he doesnt know how to find school network and co...
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Line 19, column 126, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ime to contribute to their communities. Even if some gets time at the very late stage ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'i feel', 'i think', 'to begin with', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226775956284 0.229887763892 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.169398907104 0.158761421928 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0819672131148 0.0866891130778 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0437158469945 0.046263068375 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.128415300546 0.0685040099705 187% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.139344262295 0.118717715034 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0355191256831 0.0351676179071 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.28549673502 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0437158469945 0.0309702414327 141% => OK
Particles: 0.00546448087432 0.00188951952338 289% => OK
Determiners: 0.0382513661202 0.0887237588012 43% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00273224043716 0.0209618222197 13% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00546448087432 0.0139019557991 39% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1864.0 2387.08602151 78% => OK
No of words: 338.0 408.028673835 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51479289941 5.86048508987 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.248520710059 0.338922669872 73% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.159763313609 0.251872472559 63% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.103550295858 0.174417080927 59% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0710059171598 0.112833075102 63% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28549673502 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502958579882 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 52.1960512043 59.2087087015 88% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 24.1428571429 20.5533526081 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5729434241 48.84282405 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.142857143 120.699889404 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 20.5533526081 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.644075263715 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.5376344086 331% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 40.1191885038 45.7405998639 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.176 1.45489161554 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263474962188 0.300154397459 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.120813648837 0.103427244359 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0673993936431 0.0752933317313 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.77108443884 0.497263757937 155% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.249522357446 0.151897553556 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11099327212 0.114077575197 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787096337405 0.0781384742642 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.142208315273 0.336927656856 42% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0655146522741 0.067059652881 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111835512151 0.210909579961 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629333639141 0.0618886996521 102% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8870967742 42% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.