It is notable, that teenage years seems easier and more careless from the outside, especially when most adults are faced with many difficulties of grown up life and often they want to return to their childhood. It is important to mention that all age periods including these two have their own advantages. In particular, children and teenagers often try to adopt trends from older generations to look cooler and more fashionable amount their peers, whereas adults also play games and fool around like children.
Advocators and proponents of the statement that teenage years are the happiest time in most people’s life, simply talk about the lack of responsibilities and now it is a careless period in life. To put it in other words, young generation are part of a family and always taken care of. Apart from that, they have a better physical condition and health, without any efforts to maintain this. Teenagers are full of dreams, hopes and curiosity concerning their future life. Along with this, in this age you focus only on your desires and it is affordable to be egoist.
From the other side , the lives of young people are, as if they are under the covering cup, where they are unable to completely see or understand the true dynamics of life. Whereas adults see more opportunities and have a broke mindset. Truly we are faced with problems during our life, however we fill our days with the best moments, such as honest love, proper friends, close family and professional success. To put it differently you have more freedom to make your own decisions, fell more confidence in your own judgment, try to build your future to become an independent person. But it must be remembered, that is not a big distance between freedom and responsibilities of people who you
From my point of view, it is harder to tap about teenage years, when you are full of happiness and anxiety as an adult, even if it is accompanied by responsibilities and hard decisions. I prefer adult life, because it is much more interestedly to struggle for desires, satisfaction and wishers.
- Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more prons to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment? 73
- People in your area are having problems with their internet connection.Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter- describe the problems- explain how they are affecting people- say what the company should do to help 84
- Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.Discuss both these view and give your own opinion. 86
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'whereas', 'apart from', 'in particular', 'such as', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234256926952 0.247107183377 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.146095717884 0.155533422707 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110831234257 0.0946595960268 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0428211586902 0.0501214627716 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.080604534005 0.0437548338989 184% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.11838790932 0.122226691241 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0226700251889 0.0403226058552 56% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7662545532 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0377833753149 0.0326793684256 116% => OK
Particles: 0.00251889168766 0.00163938923432 154% => OK
Determiners: 0.0604534005038 0.0861772015684 70% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00251889168766 0.021408717616 12% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0100755667506 0.011925033212 84% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2082.0 1933.35771543 108% => OK
No of words: 355.0 316.048096192 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86478873239 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.304225352113 0.374742101984 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.219718309859 0.28420135186 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16338028169 0.203846283523 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.10985915493 0.137316102897 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7662545532 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.037074148 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583098591549 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 66.8193334126 60.7387585426 110% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.3571428571 20.7743622355 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6991467628 49.517814964 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.714285714 127.492653851 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3571428571 20.7743622355 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.785714285714 0.814263465372 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 47.3289738431 49.1944974215 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.39252336449 1.69124875643 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338551606164 0.332605444948 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0628095613266 0.102741220458 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0566036200199 0.0668466124924 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.507782692202 0.534860350844 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157857857385 0.148594505496 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133284262227 0.134430193775 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100416193055 0.0742795772207 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.364774902827 0.324371583561 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0630608306603 0.0638462369009 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23422940877 0.228012699653 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661450717144 0.058150111329 114% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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