Some people believe that the government should impose a preferred way of life on its people. Others believe that the
government should leave its citizens free to choose their own values and ends
Government is there to help people to lead the life in a better way. Government is the public body which is there to help people in all the ways and also for the betterment of the society. The rules are very important in life to lead a very sophisticated life. The rules can be the ways which are required for people to lead their life. The rules can be the restrictions which are imposed on the people for peaceful life. Some of the rules imposed by the government are right to equality, right to freedom, right against exploitation, respect the nation and many more.Though there are many people who expect the government to leave its citizens free to choose their values and ends, there has to be general set of rules by the government for betterment of the society and in turn will help in the development of the country.
Firstly, the rules will help people to lead a very good life. For example, if the rule is " there is no right to hurt others feelings", then people will help others and they will never think of hurting others feelings. Hurting feelings will make people to develop negative attitude among themselves and people start hating each other.There will not be any honesty, respect and harmony. People start forgetting their limits and there will not be any understanding among themselves.People start fighting with each other for small things and they will never agree for others perspectives and in turn there will not be any improvements in the society.
Secondly, when the rule is not imposed and people are let free to do whatever they want, people start making their own rules. For example, When the government states that all the families should have voter identity cards to vote for a person during elections, then it is mandatory for all the families to have Voter identity cards. If this rule has not been imposed, then people having no identity card would have voted during the elections. These people can be totally from different region all together and according to the law, these people are not allowed for voting. To take care of all these things, it is better to impose some rules or the way of life on its people.
In conclusion, people may feel that the government is taking away freedom for life. But for the overall development it is compulsory to have general rules for all the people. Having some restrictions on the people's behavior will automatically help in the local development. There are so many rules imposed by the government. It is the duty of the people to follow the rules to the maximum to maintain the integrity of the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...required for people to lead their life. The rules can be the restrictions which are...
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...mposed on the people for peaceful life. Some of the rules imposed by the government are rig...
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Suggestion: Though
...ation, respect the nation and many more.Though there are many people who expect the go...
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...lves and people start hating each other.There will not be any honesty, respect and ha...
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Suggestion: People
...t be any understanding among themselves.People start fighting with each other for smal...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'as to', 'for example', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24297188755 0.240241500013 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.170682730924 0.157235817809 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0522088353414 0.0880659088768 59% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0542168674699 0.0497285424764 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0281124497992 0.0444667217837 63% => OK
Prepositions: 0.100401606426 0.12292977631 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0401606425703 0.0406280797675 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61111046309 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0461847389558 0.030933414821 149% => OK
Particles: 0.00200803212851 0.0016655270985 121% => OK
Determiners: 0.120481927711 0.0997080785238 121% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0321285140562 0.0249443105267 129% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0140562248996 0.0148568991511 95% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2601.0 2732.02544248 95% => OK
No of words: 453.0 452.878318584 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7417218543 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.298013245033 0.366273622748 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.19646799117 0.280924506359 70% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.145695364238 0.200843997647 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0883002207506 0.132149295362 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61111046309 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 219.290929204 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.397350993377 0.48968727796 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.5137036601 55.4138127331 79% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.65 23.380412469 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.4806032532 59.4972553346 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.05 141.124799967 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.65 23.380412469 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.65 0.674092028746 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 42.296799117 51.4728631049 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.51587301587 1.64882698954 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344518703873 0.391690518653 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.201195423134 0.123202303941 163% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.139406279612 0.077325440228 180% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.603117940978 0.547984918172 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.129811870866 0.149214159877 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147763872566 0.161403998019 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613429590314 0.0892212321368 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.403525204521 0.385218514788 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0980779028697 0.0692045440612 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239682484241 0.275328986314 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522568707927 0.0653680567796 80% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.