Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business.
Why do you think that is?
What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?
Art has been the indispensable part of the human civilization from the Stone Age. Although in this era of modernization, more importance is given to the science and technology and few to the art and the artists. Some causes for this ignorance can be identified, but there are some solutions which could help to turn this view.
There are two primary reasons why attention of the people is turned into technical areas. Firstly, human beings are heavily dependent on the technology and medical science to survive on this earth, especially to fight the diseases and to create the earth more comfortabl...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228476821192 0.247107183377 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.168874172185 0.155533422707 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0794701986755 0.0946595960268 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0562913907285 0.0501214627716 112% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0132450331126 0.0437548338989 30% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0927152317881 0.122226691241 76% => OK
Participles: 0.0397350993377 0.0403226058552 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74359461026 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0562913907285 0.0326793684256 172% => OK
Particles: 0.00331125827815 0.00163938923432 202% => OK
Determiners: 0.112582781457 0.0861772015684 131% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0298013245033 0.021408717616 139% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0198675496689 0.011925033212 167% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1643.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 270.0 316.048096192 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.08518518519 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.377777777778 0.374742101984 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.274074074074 0.28420135186 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.188888888889 0.203846283523 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125925925926 0.137316102897 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74359461026 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.037074148 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585185185185 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 61.2499550745 60.7387585426 101% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.875 20.7743622355 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4223547398 49.517814964 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.6875 127.492653851 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7743622355 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.814263465372 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 44.2824074074 49.1944974215 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.51388888889 1.69124875643 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358848506201 0.332605444948 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0762223492438 0.102741220458 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0643193123686 0.0668466124924 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.478774225065 0.534860350844 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137148076709 0.148594505496 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124427953518 0.134430193775 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859822952339 0.0742795772207 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.304633139174 0.324371583561 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0665634480563 0.0638462369009 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228783344714 0.228012699653 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080421930445 0.058150111329 138% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.