Politicians are more responsible for protection of the environment than individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Since technology has overtaken the nature friendly gadgets, protecting our valuable environment has become very crucial for human being. Whether politicians are alone responsible for saving our nature or its the mandatory job for every inhabitant has sparked a heated debate. here i will discord the given statement
Multifarious points can be given to shore up my view. First and foremost, it is next to impossible for politicians to take care of our environment all alone as they can only pass the rules but it is the people who has to implement them in their daily routine. In addition, their are only handful of politicians in any country. Hence, we cant expect them to be the environment survival, local people has to step forward and vast contribution ought to be made by them in order to lead healthy lifestyle by protecting our priceless environment
Further emphasizing on my point of view, it is next to impossible for politicians and law authorities to stop people doing every single activity which is harmful for our environment. Thus, people should be educated enough to perform things by keeping environment safety in mind
Others have conflicting views, according to them, government is being elected to take care the every single aspect of country including environment. So, politicians should impose every single law strictly in order to save environment. They also claim that politicians are financially strong and can afford to run campaigns and other activities to make people aware about the importance of environment. That is how people can be made to take care of environment
To recapitulate, combine efforts of politicians and individuals are recommended to save the natural gift of god but it is people who has to take care that they do not do anything that hurt environment
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...em in their daily routine. In addition, their are only handful of politicians in any ...
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...f politicians in any country. Hence, we cant expect them to be the environment survi...
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...nment survival, local people has to step forward and vast contribution ought to b...
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...do not do anything that hurt environment
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'as to', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233438485804 0.247107183377 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.220820189274 0.155533422707 142% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0820189274448 0.0946595960268 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0473186119874 0.0501214627716 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0694006309148 0.0437548338989 159% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0914826498423 0.122226691241 75% => OK
Participles: 0.0630914826498 0.0403226058552 156% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.93604238096 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0630914826498 0.0326793684256 193% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00315457413249 0.00163938923432 192% => OK
Determiners: 0.0536277602524 0.0861772015684 62% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0252365930599 0.021408717616 118% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0157728706625 0.011925033212 132% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1803.0 1933.35771543 93% => OK
No of words: 297.0 316.048096192 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.07070707071 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.353535353535 0.374742101984 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252525252525 0.28420135186 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.195286195286 0.203846283523 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.164983164983 0.137316102897 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93604238096 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.037074148 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.56093040696 97% => OK
Word variations: 56.282905073 60.7387585426 93% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0891783567 62% => OK
Sentence length: 29.7 20.7743622355 143% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.0616468732 49.517814964 194% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 180.3 127.492653851 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7 20.7743622355 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9 0.814263465372 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 54.9525252525 49.1944974215 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.14953271028 1.69124875643 68% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308757002999 0.332605444948 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.159457776167 0.102741220458 155% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.102136116448 0.0668466124924 153% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.599688897023 0.534860350844 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.193235686757 0.148594505496 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147611087937 0.134430193775 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055691856463 0.0742795772207 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.347354321789 0.324371583561 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.110951417503 0.0638462369009 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20494814341 0.228012699653 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337838257445 0.058150111329 58% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 10.4468937876 67% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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