The line chart illustrate the number of Channel one viewers of different time in a year.
The number of viewers of 1 pm news remains steady in the whole year, which is approximately 1.3 million. The commencement of 11 pm news is 1st May. The number of viewers of 11 pm news shows a sharp increase from May to August. It reached its peak in August with more than 4 million viewers. Afterwards, it decreased gradually from August to December. The number of viewers in merely near 1 million.
The number of viewers of 6 pm news fluctuate in the whole year. Generally, it decreased from nearly 5 million in January to a bit more than 3 million in December. The number of viewers of 9:30 pm news demonstrated a modest increase from January to May. It reach its peak in May with 3.8 million viewers. After this, it decreased sharply from May to August, and to the bottom in August with 1 million viewers. From August to September, it increased drastically. It continued a gradual increase from September to December. It has 3 million viewers in December.
Over all, the 1 pm news shows a steady number of viewers. The 11 pm news experienced up and down after introduction. Both 6 pm and 9:30 pm news fluctuated in the whole year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one viewer', 'a viewer', or simply 'viewers'?
Suggestion: one viewer; a viewer; viewers
... chart illustrate the number of Channel one viewers of different time in a year. The nu...
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Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ar, which is approximately 1.3 million. The commencement of 11 pm news is 1st May. ...
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Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... commencement of 11 pm news is 1st May. The number of viewers of 11 pm news shows a...
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Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reaches'?
Suggestion: reaches
...modest increase from January to May. It reach its peak in May with 3.8 million viewer...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'may']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275303643725 0.268076937826 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.0688259109312 0.116061578633 59% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0688259109312 0.0759168565197 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0323886639676 0.0366838410393 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0404858299595 0.0131127313244 309% => OK
Prepositions: 0.161943319838 0.155750635184 104% => OK
Participles: 0.00404858299595 0.0379272487307 11% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.75378527364 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0323886639676 0.0210936926555 154% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0931174089069 0.0948980150116 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00404858299595 0.00967000014798 42% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1233.0 1161.00487805 106% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.9 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55405405405 5.90752243213 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73763899035 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.324324324324 0.337110787985 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.247747747748 0.247514529752 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.148648648649 0.171178102325 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108108108108 0.112407865282 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75378527364 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.396396396396 0.546246751206 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 34.1741698822 49.3433353143 69% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 8.93414634146 201% => Less sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 12.3333333333 23.0094962315 54% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.6233117528 42.9750493124 48% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5 135.714022679 50% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3333333333 23.0094962315 54% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.111111111111 0.689975730869 16% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.48048780488 270% => OK
Readability: 37.1081081081 47.7609492067 78% => OK
Elegance: 3.11428571429 2.94281807926 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0765964754355 0.418131533498 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.21933998346 0.181151798455 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.129524935582 0.0850326197045 152% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.564878959674 0.706616315825 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.169611827378 0.157042692854 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363120920757 0.228904883108 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387160271993 0.108899403657 36% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.460740202945 0.367819155151 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.182093581596 0.0812612215331 224% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749528692847 0.316326947829 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359477928385 0.0921553760075 39% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70731707317 297% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.08536585366 171% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 3.16585365854 347% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 7.1512195122 196% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.