Some people think that a person can never understand the culture of a country unless they speak the language.
Do you agree with this opinion?
Language is very important in all the world and for an individual to progress in a foreign country it is much important for him/her to understand the language of that country so that he/she will be able to know about the culture, way of dealing with local people. I believe that local language of a nation play a great role in the development of a person in foreign countries.
First of all, when a person travel to some other country, for every purpose such as education, business and immigration, he/she needs to understand the language of that particular place, and it will help very much in daily routine works. For instance, of a person travel to a foreign country for education, and he/she did not know about local language, there will be a lot of problems face to him/her and as a result that person will not be able to acquire full command on his/her education.
Furthermore, if some is doing business in a foreign country so that person needs to deal with local of that place and for best dealing he/she needs to have full command on local language. Individuals needs to follow the culture and civilization of a foreign country and without knowing about language it seems to be difficult for every person.
Therefore, I agree that for progressing in a foreign country, a person to have full command on language of that local area, and it helps in understanding of the culture and civilization of a nation and make easy to deal with local people for different purposes.
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Essay evaluation report
I believe that local language of a nation play a great role
I believe that the local language of a nation plays a great role
when a person travel to some other country,
when a person travels to some other countries,
Sentence: Furthermore, if some is doing business in a foreign country so that person needs to deal with local of that place and for best dealing he/she needs to have full command on local language.
Description: The tag a determiner/pronoun, singular or plural is not usually followed by is
Suggestion: Refer to some and is
a person to have full command
a person need to have full command
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Different Words: 104 200
The essay is not exactly right on the topic. Read the essay topic again and think why.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 268 350
No. of Characters: 1187 1500
No. of Different Words: 104 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.046 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.429 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.558 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 77 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 62 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 38.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.872 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.564 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.794 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.288 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'for instance', 'such as', 'as a result', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256227758007 0.247107183377 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.11743772242 0.155533422707 76% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110320284698 0.0946595960268 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0320284697509 0.0501214627716 64% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0213523131673 0.0437548338989 49% => OK
Prepositions: 0.167259786477 0.122226691241 137% => OK
Participles: 0.017793594306 0.0403226058552 44% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.67475213207 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0498220640569 0.0326793684256 152% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.110320284698 0.0861772015684 128% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0142348754448 0.021408717616 66% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00355871886121 0.011925033212 30% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1485.0 1933.35771543 77% => OK
No of words: 261.0 316.048096192 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68965517241 6.12580529183 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.329501915709 0.374742101984 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.256704980843 0.28420135186 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.145593869732 0.203846283523 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.095785440613 0.137316102897 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67475213207 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.037074148 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.417624521073 0.56093040696 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 38.176056428 60.7387585426 63% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0891783567 44% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 37.2857142857 20.7743622355 179% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2319783148 49.517814964 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 212.142857143 127.492653851 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.2857142857 20.7743622355 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.28571428571 0.814263465372 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 62.95621237 49.1944974215 128% => OK
Elegance: 2.58333333333 1.69124875643 153% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260623038566 0.332605444948 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.247378324922 0.102741220458 241% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0602176179487 0.0668466124924 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.810833194687 0.534860350844 152% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.116357819774 0.148594505496 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17817307611 0.134430193775 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513834179858 0.0742795772207 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.53002394184 0.324371583561 163% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0273882991859 0.0638462369009 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214491129147 0.228012699653 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495188005954 0.058150111329 85% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 10.4468937876 67% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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