It is a fact that travellers are increasing day by day. However, I admit that most of them are interested to spend their time with others than to be alone. Main aim of this essay is to discuss both views and to draw a rationalistic conclusion.
Admittedly, some people are interested to travel alone. They concentrate more on the calm atmosphere where they can concentrate more on their work rather than enjoyment. To substantiate, certain travel needs are depend on education or job subjects. All of these members are concentrating on their way that how to make use of it.These people are not willing to get disturbances from others. They sustain good concentration in which proper utility of their current situation. For example, journey to forests to find out extra ordinary species of dragon flies.
On the other hand, some of them are eagerly waiting to spend their leisure time with others by means of travelling. They think to join with others to get relaxation or find it as mock. Enjoyment and amusing activities are their major goal. To site an example, my elder brother went to kashmir (around 3 days of journey from my home)last year along with his 3 friends on his vacation. He found it as fun. Nevertheless, it is not a matter of money,some see pleasure in travelling. It may be ambitious or may not, but depend on each individual.
Moreover, these kind of move relates to historical. To find out the root of ancestors, or pilloried monuments. So journey may be interesting if there are collegues. It is not wastage of time, only means to avoid hesitation created by boring environment. However, we cannot deny the fact that the outcome of major goal is important than the way they select.
In my view, joining with friends can reduce the tension and reduce workload. Selection of destination and periodical selection of friends are important. So travel with others is the best choice,it is also substanciate in medical emergency. So set a goal before proceeding.
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Essay evaluation report
are depend on education or job subjects.
are depending on education or job subjects.
depend on education or job subjects.
They sustain good concentration in which proper utility of their current situation.
Description: what is the verb for 'which'? can you re-write this sentence?
It is not wastage of time,
It is not a wast of time,
Sentence: So journey may be interesting if there are collegues.
Error: collegues Suggestion: colleges
Sentence: So travel with others is the best choice,it is also substanciate in medical emergency.
Error: substanciate Suggestion: substantiate
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.64 21.0 //More compound or complex sentences/clauses wanted.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 341 350
No. of Characters: 1593 1500
No. of Different Words: 191 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.297 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.672 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.701 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 105 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 81 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.64 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.527 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.44 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.229 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.441 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.043 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
... substantiate, certain travel needs are depend on education or job subjects. All of th...
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Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: These
...on their way that how to make use of it.These people are not willing to get disturban...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'mocks'?
Suggestion: mocks
... others to get relaxation or find it as mock. Enjoyment and amusing activities are t...
^^^^
Line 5, column 398, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'funs'?
Suggestion: funs
...friends on his vacation. He found it as fun. Nevertheless, it is not a matter of mo...
^^^
Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , some
...evertheless, it is not a matter of money,some see pleasure in travelling. It may be a...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...depend on each individual. Moreover, these kind of move relates to historical. To find ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 194, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...So travel with others is the best choice,it is also substanciate in medical emergen...
^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'for example', 'kind of', 'in my view', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236220472441 0.247107183377 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.157480314961 0.155533422707 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0708661417323 0.0946595960268 75% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0524934383202 0.0501214627716 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0734908136483 0.0437548338989 168% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.136482939633 0.122226691241 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0262467191601 0.0403226058552 65% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86311055528 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0472440944882 0.0326793684256 145% => OK
Particles: 0.00524934383202 0.00163938923432 320% => OK
Determiners: 0.0577427821522 0.0861772015684 67% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0157480314961 0.021408717616 74% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00787401574803 0.011925033212 66% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1983.0 1933.35771543 103% => OK
No of words: 338.0 316.048096192 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86686390533 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325443786982 0.374742101984 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.254437869822 0.28420135186 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.165680473373 0.203846283523 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.14201183432 0.137316102897 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86311055528 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.037074148 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565088757396 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 62.2731255033 60.7387585426 103% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0891783567 155% => OK
Sentence length: 13.52 20.7743622355 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0438564932 49.517814964 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.32 127.492653851 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.52 20.7743622355 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.48 0.814263465372 59% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 38.9637869822 49.1944974215 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.40740740741 1.69124875643 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307106944182 0.332605444948 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0518293795055 0.102741220458 50% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0424335549209 0.0668466124924 63% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.419571025013 0.534860350844 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.12034080915 0.148594505496 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100027913967 0.134430193775 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787974236292 0.0742795772207 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.308933793703 0.324371583561 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0649694984871 0.0638462369009 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200982712121 0.228012699653 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483104956044 0.058150111329 83% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.68436873747 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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