Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Arts consist of various forms such as music, dance, paintings, architecture, etc. People feel good when they listen to music or watch some comedy movie. It is necessary that governments should encourage arts but when compared to safety, the later is more important. Therefore, the government should invest in arts but not as much as they invest in military.
"Governments exist to protect us from each other". The famous saying as stated by Ronald Reagan expresses the importance of government. If government didn't existed, humans would have torn each other apart, literally. The greed would have led to eat each other up. As a result, each countries government make sure this doesn't happen and is responsible for protecting its citizen from international as well as domestic threats. Military helps in achieving this. Various agencies employed by American government, such as, CIA, DEA, FBI, exist to protect its people from threats. A lot of funds are needed to ensure their smooth functioning. This budget is allocated to military and defense from the taxes countries collect from its citizen.
Moreover, technological advancements in military is also important. New research is done everyday. Science has helped to develop various advanced weapons which has led to save the human life in warfront. The pyrrhic victory was never acceptable to anyone. The goal of technological advancements in warfare is that loss of human life should always be less. Thus, keeping this in mind new weapons such as human-less drones, automatic missiles, nuclear nukes, etc are developed. If the government would have been hesitant to invest in these development, then it would have proved a drawback.
Also, it is necessary to keep the advancements secret from threats. If the information is leaked to some terrorist group, it may prove deleterious. Suppose a department in military has a breakthrough in the research which can revolutionize the safety to country. If such kind of information gets into wrong hand they can sell it to terrorist organizations for money. Hence, for safety from such threats investing money in keeping things secret is also necessary. Large private and public organizations are given contract by governments to keep things safe and ensure such blunders don't happen. Exemplifying, no body knows what goes on in Area 51 which is known to be the secret military base in Nevada desert.
Coming to other point, arts is as necessary as is military. Along with safety people also demand to listen to good music, watch some good paintings. I myself feel good when I see paintings at exhibition. As a result government should look after its people liberty as well. They should promote the arts by building various museums, theaters, etc. But the amount of money invested should be more in military when compared.
Concluding, arts is no doubt, necessary. But when it comes to security it is at most necessary that government invest in military. People will only to to plays, concerts, music show when they believe they are safe.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'kind of', 'no doubt', 'such as', 'as a result', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.229824561404 0.240241500013 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.173684210526 0.157235817809 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.117543859649 0.0880659088768 133% => OK
Adverbs: 0.040350877193 0.0497285424764 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0385964912281 0.0444667217837 87% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101754385965 0.12292977631 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0456140350877 0.0406280797675 112% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85272996544 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.040350877193 0.030933414821 130% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0649122807018 0.0997080785238 65% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0245614035088 0.0249443105267 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.019298245614 0.0148568991511 130% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3049.0 2732.02544248 112% => OK
No of words: 496.0 452.878318584 110% => OK
Chars per words: 6.14717741935 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.58838876751 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.389112903226 0.366273622748 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.264112903226 0.280924506359 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.199596774194 0.200843997647 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.145161290323 0.132149295362 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85272996544 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 219.290929204 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520161290323 0.48968727796 106% => OK
Word variations: 61.9875895028 55.4138127331 112% => OK
How many sentences: 36.0 20.6194690265 175% => OK
Sentence length: 13.7777777778 23.380412469 59% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5418254929 59.4972553346 48% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6944444444 141.124799967 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7777777778 23.380412469 59% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.472222222222 0.674092028746 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.21349557522 192% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 40.1890681004 51.4728631049 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.49305555556 1.64882698954 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380079079684 0.391690518653 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0726893860572 0.123202303941 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0691150026059 0.077325440228 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.403512650763 0.547984918172 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.103061117849 0.149214159877 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111733239432 0.161403998019 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908614976919 0.0892212321368 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.260257384123 0.385218514788 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0531201443033 0.0692045440612 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236788918607 0.275328986314 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698289075124 0.0653680567796 107% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.4325221239 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.30420353982 226% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.66592920354 191% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.