People who pursue their own intellectual interests for purely personal reasons are more likely
to benefit the rest of the world than are people who try to act for the public good.
The author asserts that the People who pursue their own Intellectual interests for their own advantages and for their own needs and benefit are likely go get most advantage from the the things that they do as compared to people who who work for the welfare of the society. I totally agree with the author that people who do welfare to the society are like to get most benefit than the people who work for themselves for their own beneifits.
First of all the fact that,we all want go food air,water and all the good stuffs in the world and we all want to be in the top of the world, but in the quest of reaching the top we work days in days out with our own intellectual interests so that we get good fruit and we can come out with the flying colors, but all the efforts we put in acheiveing those tasks is for ourselves, we work for ourselves and forget about the people outside our world ,and people who work for the betterment for the society get any so little benefit than the people who work for themselves, as such the people who work for the social causes are little highlighted as people who work for themselves
For instance , a renowned actor in our country had intiated the serve for the poor campaign to feed the poor and the needy, to serve the food meals, he did this because he wanted to do promotion of his film yet, by looking all his daily developments for mass feeding the poor people considered him that he does social service has is very kind by heart and went to watch his film, but the truth is it was not he who feed the poor it was his his team who did all the arrangements and he only benefited form it and became renowned as a social service.
Although there are many instances where people who do welfare of the society are like to get the benefit from the people who work for themselves , in the latest trend with the advent of social media and and also communication, people are made to realize that there are instances, where people who do betterment for the society are likely to get benefit, they are many government schemes which are laid so that the people who are entangled in social activity are benefited the most ,once such scheme is Jawar Rogar Yojana by the government of India who provides financial support for the people who are willing to eradicate AIDS among the people my bringing awareness among the people to fight AIDS.
In the sum there are many times who work for themselves with their own intellectual interests are likely to get most of it as compared to people who are entangled to do the welfare for the society, but with people becoming smarter these days also the support from the wide spread media and government people who try to act for public are also finding their ways with some sort of benefits.
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| 2019-08-18 | Seema Modak | 50 | view |
| 2016-10-01 | Tejas Kulkarni | 50 | view |
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'for instance', 'sort of', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.222429906542 0.240241500013 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.175700934579 0.157235817809 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0785046728972 0.0880659088768 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0261682242991 0.0497285424764 53% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0747663551402 0.0444667217837 168% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.138317757009 0.12292977631 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0299065420561 0.0406280797675 74% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.29094735619 2.79330140395 82% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0317757009346 0.030933414821 103% => OK
Particles: 0.00373831775701 0.0016655270985 224% => OK
Determiners: 0.110280373832 0.0997080785238 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0018691588785 0.0249443105267 7% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0448598130841 0.0148568991511 302% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2772.0 2732.02544248 101% => OK
No of words: 512.0 452.878318584 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4140625 6.0361032391 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.265625 0.366273622748 73% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.16796875 0.280924506359 60% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.109375 0.200843997647 54% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.076171875 0.132149295362 58% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29094735619 2.79330140395 82% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 219.290929204 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.380859375 0.48968727796 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.3589928075 55.4138127331 78% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6194690265 24% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 102.4 23.380412469 438% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 383.637328736 59.4972553346 645% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 554.4 141.124799967 393% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 102.4 23.380412469 438% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.8 0.674092028746 267% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.21349557522 403% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 119.196875 51.4728631049 232% => OK
Elegance: 1.41216216216 1.64882698954 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.616912834764 0.391690518653 158% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.500734543797 0.123202303941 406% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0950787692108 0.077325440228 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.971581942107 0.547984918172 177% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.04550249974 0.149214159877 30% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.506302350998 0.161403998019 314% => Sentence topic similarity is too high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428947816902 0.0892212321368 48% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.491158201696 0.385218514788 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.132077963041 0.0692045440612 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.464473717638 0.275328986314 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117024132215 0.0653680567796 179% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 13.5995575221 37% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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