Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world.
What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.
Youth crimes are increasing everywhere and this became a growing concern around the globe. There are several reasons for the increasing of this rate but the foremost reason would be the poverty. The government can provide the stricter punishment onto young criminals as well as parents.
The foremost reason for the increasing youth criminal rate is the poverty. Since the world is suffering from poverty, the more households are having a difficulty to live in a daily basis. This can be seen from the US statistics where it showed about the expansion of income gaps in last few decades. This inevitably means that those who are poorer will have to resort illegal actions in order to possess of what others have. This has been the one of reasons that contributes to increase the youth criminal rates.
There are two possible solutions to tackle this issue. Firstly, one of the ways to solve this issue is by imposing of stricter punishments. Even though the reasons are outside factors that lead to crimes, it is still important to have severe punishments by showing them as an example to other criminals. Also, the second way of dealing with this typical issue is to punish those young criminals’ parents for lacking of their roles to control their children. Parents have to take more responsibility for their children commit crimes. With all these measure, the youth crimes will be solved but currently way of courts are too lenient.
In conclusion, several factors have led up to increase in youth crime, but the stronger punishments are available to tackle this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'in conclusion', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231034482759 0.247107183377 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.179310344828 0.155533422707 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0965517241379 0.0946595960268 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0344827586207 0.0501214627716 69% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0206896551724 0.0437548338989 47% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110344827586 0.122226691241 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0448275862069 0.0403226058552 111% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58891027078 2.80594681477 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.048275862069 0.0326793684256 148% => OK
Particles: 0.00344827586207 0.00163938923432 210% => OK
Determiners: 0.124137931034 0.0861772015684 144% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0172413793103 0.021408717616 81% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0172413793103 0.011925033212 145% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1581.0 1933.35771543 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 316.048096192 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96603773585 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.366037735849 0.374742101984 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.264150943396 0.28420135186 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.17358490566 0.203846283523 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0981132075472 0.137316102897 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58891027078 2.80594681477 92% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.037074148 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562264150943 0.56093040696 100% => OK
Word variations: 56.815545147 60.7387585426 94% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.6666666667 20.7743622355 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7824706087 49.517814964 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.4 127.492653851 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7743622355 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 0.814263465372 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 44.0817610063 49.1944974215 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.64705882353 1.69124875643 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414370601195 0.332605444948 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.128949763085 0.102741220458 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0647975567456 0.0668466124924 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.558636005384 0.534860350844 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155157535542 0.148594505496 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179758578855 0.134430193775 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861051016246 0.0742795772207 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.386343287879 0.324371583561 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0586629302154 0.0638462369009 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297655990838 0.228012699653 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881435037876 0.058150111329 152% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 2.5751503006 311% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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