Fossil fuels are used in many countries. Other countries use alternative sources of energy, such as wind and solar power, which is encouraged. To what extent is this positive or negative development?
As the result of unsustainable development, which has depended on exploitation of fossil fuels, environment has been destroyed and global natural resources have been depleted. Therefore, some countries have invested in alternative energy such as wind and solar power. Although there are some dangers for this new approach, but I believe that the benefits outweigh the drawback.
On the one hand, using green energy is an effective solution to solve the problem of over demand for energy recently in many countries, especially when fossil fuels are depleting because of human overexploitation. The green power sources are renewable, they will guarantee a boundless supply of energy for future generation, inspire of depending on traditional limited resources. Furthermore, the new energies, such as wind and solar power, are eco-friendly sources and do not contribute to pollution. As no carbon emission, problem of change and poor quality air will be tacked by using alternative energies, so that global environment could be protected.
On the other hand, there are certainly negative consequences of increasing reliance on alternative resources of energy. Perhaps the main concern is issue of safety. The nuclear power is criticized for its potential to pollute the environment, and incidents such as the disaster Fukushima Daiichi in Japan remind the public of the dangers of nuclear plants. The poisonous and the radioactive emissions are produced by the explosion not only kill many people, but also left a legacy of cancer deaths for the future.
In conclusion, I consider that it is important for governments and public to support the use of alternative sources of energy, but the development of these energies need to be researched carefully to avoid unfortunate incidents.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'so', 'therefore', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.152597402597 0.155533422707 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.133116883117 0.0946595960268 141% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0324675324675 0.0501214627716 65% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0162337662338 0.0437548338989 37% => OK
Prepositions: 0.146103896104 0.122226691241 120% => OK
Participles: 0.0519480519481 0.0403226058552 129% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.06434286508 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0194805194805 0.0326793684256 60% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0909090909091 0.0861772015684 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00974025974026 0.021408717616 45% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00649350649351 0.011925033212 54% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1791.0 1933.35771543 93% => OK
No of words: 278.0 316.048096192 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.44244604317 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.431654676259 0.374742101984 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.345323741007 0.28420135186 122% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.251798561151 0.203846283523 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.205035971223 0.137316102897 149% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06434286508 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.037074148 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593525179856 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 63.4806913408 60.7387585426 105% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 23.1666666667 20.7743622355 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8811250749 49.517814964 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.25 127.492653851 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7743622355 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.814263465372 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 57.6990407674 49.1944974215 117% => OK
Elegance: 2.22580645161 1.69124875643 132% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33049048661 0.332605444948 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.108678652884 0.102741220458 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0440890395552 0.0668466124924 66% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.587217225256 0.534860350844 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166471429659 0.148594505496 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152883698592 0.134430193775 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852397345676 0.0742795772207 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.390277160363 0.324371583561 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0403558296391 0.0638462369009 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238490376285 0.228012699653 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503834946975 0.058150111329 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.