The consumption of the world’s resources (oil, and water etc.) is increasing at a dangerous rate. What are causes and solutions?
It is true that global natural resources such as oil and water are being depleted at an alarming rate. There are a number of reasons behind this phenomenon and several solutions should be adopted to solve the problem.
There are two primary reasons why the world’s natural resources are being over-exploited. Firstly, developing countries are heavily dependent on natural resources to drive their economy, especially in transportation and energy fields. As their citizen is getting wealthier, the demand for their consumption of natural resources is increasing to the level of demand in developed countries, in term of gas for cars and electric for bigger homes and offices. Secondly, it is easier to use natural resources rather than spending money to develop and convert sustainable alternatives, like solar and wind energy. Politicians fear to risk unpopularity by raising energy prices to fund such developments.
Some measures should be taken to mitigate the problem of overconsumption of these resources. The first measure is that government must impose a higher tax on the use of depletable resources to reduce the demand. By raising tax, people’s pockets are affected directly, thus, they will use these resources more responsibly. For example, water meter should be installed in homes and workplaces. Another essential measure is to develop and introduce renewable sources like solar and wind energy as alternatives. These clean energies not only minimize human reliance on the Earth’s natural resources but also help protect environment. Furthermore, individuals must be educated to use viral resources sparingly and wisely. Even simple things like not leaving tap running and leaving lights switched on unnecessarily can all help reduce consumption.
In conclusion, the overuse of the world’s resources is a big problem for all countries and solution must be implemented urgently to tackle this issue.
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- Some people think governments should spend less money on arts and invest more in education.How far do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 67
- Fossil fuels are used in many countries. Other countries use alternative sources of energy, such as wind and solar power, which is encouraged. To what extent is this positive or negative development? 67
- The consumption of the world s resources oil and water etc is increasing at a dangerous rate What are causes and solutions 72
- Some people think governments should spend less money on arts and invest more in education How far do you agree or disagree with this opinion 84
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'thus', 'as for', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252941176471 0.247107183377 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.179411764706 0.155533422707 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105882352941 0.0946595960268 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0470588235294 0.0501214627716 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0176470588235 0.0437548338989 40% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1 0.122226691241 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0558823529412 0.0403226058552 139% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.08323626615 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0352941176471 0.0326793684256 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0735294117647 0.0861772015684 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0235294117647 0.021408717616 110% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00294117647059 0.011925033212 25% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1942.0 1933.35771543 100% => OK
No of words: 296.0 316.048096192 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.56081081081 6.12580529183 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.445945945946 0.374742101984 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.364864864865 0.28420135186 128% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.246621621622 0.203846283523 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.182432432432 0.137316102897 133% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08323626615 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.037074148 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584459459459 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 63.0931056918 60.7387585426 104% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.039653876 49.517814964 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.375 127.492653851 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 0.814263465372 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 54.9864864865 49.1944974215 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.67469879518 1.69124875643 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423551992581 0.332605444948 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0836871124043 0.102741220458 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.070230888715 0.0668466124924 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.474114728363 0.534860350844 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.184177117611 0.148594505496 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150740818543 0.134430193775 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784837637163 0.0742795772207 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.357468993542 0.324371583561 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0453975467963 0.0638462369009 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302044605175 0.228012699653 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275552920418 0.058150111329 47% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.