The consumption of the world's resources (oil, and water etc.) is increasing at a dangerous rate. What are causes and solutions?
It is completely true that the natural reservoirs such as oil and water are being depleted at the alarming rate. There are various factors that are considered as reasons of this problem and many authorities have been enacting solutions to tackle the problem.
There are two major causes that account for the most significant roots of the consumption of the world’s resources. The first reason is a high level of industrialization and modernization. To be specific, a part of results of industrial revolution is the scarcity of natural raw matters that are exploited from quarries in nature for manufacture that consume a great deal of natural resources. In additional, modern life witnesses a breakthrough of transportation that demands a huge amount of fuels. The rest one is the lack of perception about preservation of natural reservoirs that is arising among youngsters. For example, surveys have shown that most individuals who is under-aged-30-group are more likely to leave the taps running or leave the light switched rather than others.
Natural reservoirs are not renewable resources and the excessive consumption of those poses a serious threat to not only environment but also humanity development, thus governments should implement plans that can help to solves this problem. Firstly, authorities should impose some tax policies on the consumption of natural resources or the products that generated from these resources such as oil, gas. Besides, more funding should be required from government funds to help companies to develop alternative resources, such as solar energy or tidal energy. Secondly, educators should add more educational programs from primary school to university in order to improve knowledge about some stuff like preservation or importance of water for youngsters. Hopefully, this gives may increase their perception about how to protect our planet, especially preserving non-renewable natural reservoir.
In conclusion, it is extremely clear that our use of natural reservoirs such as oil and water is rising at alarming rate despite appropriate purposes for development. Not only authorities must have solutions to address this problem, but also every individual should arise perception of preservation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'solve'.
Suggestion: solve
...should implement plans that can help to solves this problem. Firstly, authorities shou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5523255814 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16960193395 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575581395349 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8627386692 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164853239347 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551128802476 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651210377429 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109539186484 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427672108169 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.