The graph below shows a percentage who drank each unit group on heaviest drinking day by age group, 2014 in the UK.
The graph represents the proportion of British people in four age groups (16 to 24, 25 to 44, 45 to 64, 65 and over) by drinking four distinctive units from +14 units, 7-14 units, more than 4,67 units and below 4,67 units in 2014.
Overall, drinking up to 4,67 units recorded the highest units for all age groups and especially for younger groups, whereas 4,67 units of drinking was relevantly similar throughout the four distinctive age groups. Meanwhile, drinking more than 14 units and 7-14 units experienced a declining trend as the age of drunken people in the UK rose.
In terms of drinking unit of up to 4,67 had dedicated for the highest proportion for all age groups; 45% of younger age group drank up to 4,67 units, nearly 50% for 25 to 64 years of people drank up to that limit and over 75% for people drank up to 4,67 units of drink. Meanwhile, all age groups drank 15% of 4,67 drinking units.
In contrast, drinking of more than 14 units and 7 to 14 units witnessed the same declining trends as the drinking age increases. The highest proportion was found from the younger group of about 15% drank more than 14 units and a quarter for 7-14 units, and which decreased until the proportion of drinking had recorded at approximately 5% and 10% for more than 14 units of drinking and 7-14 units of drinking respectively for senior groups (over 65 years).
- The graph below shows a percentage who drank each unit group on heaviest drinking day by age group, 2014 in the UK. Summarise the information by choosing and describe the main idea, and make comparisons where appropriate. 73
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Discourse Markers used:
['whereas', 'while', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.264705882353 0.268076937826 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.0882352941176 0.116061578633 76% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0882352941176 0.0759168565197 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0441176470588 0.0366838410393 120% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.165441176471 0.155750635184 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0367647058824 0.0379272487307 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.48496017514 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0367647058824 0.0210936926555 174% => OK
Particles: 0.00367647058824 0.00175180941692 210% => OK
Determiners: 0.0661764705882 0.0948980150116 70% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00367647058824 0.00967000014798 38% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1362.0 1161.00487805 117% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.9 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55918367347 5.90752243213 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73763899035 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.277551020408 0.337110787985 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.204081632653 0.247514529752 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14693877551 0.171178102325 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0897959183673 0.112407865282 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48496017514 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.391836734694 0.546246751206 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 34.9803207789 49.3433353143 71% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 35.0 23.0094962315 152% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.7704577846 42.9750493124 200% => OK
Chars per sentence: 194.571428571 135.714022679 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 23.0094962315 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.689975730869 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 55.4081632653 47.7609492067 116% => OK
Elegance: 3.52777777778 2.94281807926 120% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205499202522 0.418131533498 49% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.275642671879 0.181151798455 152% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.110006210656 0.0850326197045 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.822981773103 0.706616315825 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.154373653727 0.157042692854 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141864508845 0.228904883108 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0264621732964 0.108899403657 24% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.488692243065 0.367819155151 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0790302682305 0.0812612215331 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158452979538 0.316326947829 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150884278671 0.0921553760075 16% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.