It is believe that the traffic police should apply heavy fines to driver violating the traffic regulation in order to decrease the numbers of road accident. Do you agree or disagree with his idea?
The numbers of road accidents are growing around the world and these are becoming an issue. To forbid these issues, some people argue that the revising traffic laws are necessary so that any violation of traffic regulations can be heavily charged and which can reduce the traffic accidents. While I understand the necessity to control the driver’s driving habit, the residents may immigrate to another country cannot be ignored. Therefore, the mediate regulation should be recommended.
As the car accidents are growing at a rapid rate, approaches to solve these issues are required immediately. One of those approaches is the revising of fine systems so that any violation of traffic laws will be imposed of huge fines. This will put a halt to drivers to violate traffic regulations as they all will be scared of heavy fines. As a result of this, the number of car accidents will be reduced.
However, it cannot deny that unreasonably high fines can cause more crimes. In the case of Singapore, for example, they have a strict rule and that binds every movement of people. When you violate of traffic rules, the smallest charges are started from $1,000 to $50,000 fines. Due to these high fines with the traffic rules, many Singaporean have left the country and living elsewhere. Therefore, the stronger rules and fines can push habitants to leave the country.
It is fact that, the approaches to stop the car accidents because the number of car accident is growing every year as which death caused by road accidents is fatal. However, the solution for the heavy fine can create the public’s backlash by leaving the country just like Singapore. Therefore, it is important to intermediate the range of punishment where the public would not get the backlash.
In conclusion, the road accidents are the serious issue in the globe and which cases are increasing every year. Therefore, it is vital to seek a suitable and effective approach to prevent the consequences. However, there will be potential public backlash for the heavy fines; thus, the lesser stronger methods should be recommended.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.164141414141 0.155533422707 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0656565656566 0.0946595960268 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.040404040404 0.0501214627716 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.020202020202 0.0437548338989 46% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10101010101 0.122226691241 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0479797979798 0.0403226058552 119% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69519397278 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0328282828283 0.0326793684256 100% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.136363636364 0.0861772015684 158% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.040404040404 0.021408717616 189% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0126262626263 0.011925033212 106% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2104.0 1933.35771543 109% => OK
No of words: 348.0 316.048096192 110% => OK
Chars per words: 6.04597701149 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.370689655172 0.374742101984 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.287356321839 0.28420135186 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.186781609195 0.203846283523 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.126436781609 0.137316102897 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69519397278 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.037074148 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.56093040696 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.8247569234 60.7387585426 90% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.3157894737 20.7743622355 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8204213166 49.517814964 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.736842105 127.492653851 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3157894737 20.7743622355 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.473684210526 0.814263465372 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 47.0514216576 49.1944974215 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.77528089888 1.69124875643 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.477618760099 0.332605444948 144% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.108982760286 0.102741220458 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0894110732109 0.0668466124924 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.571989426619 0.534860350844 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.11849235245 0.148594505496 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195605503811 0.134430193775 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571256965007 0.0742795772207 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.376162921212 0.324371583561 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0742589775921 0.0638462369009 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.325626444945 0.228012699653 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442640398365 0.058150111329 76% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 10.4468937876 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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