It is believe that the traffic police should apply heavy fines to driver violating the traffic regulation in order to decrease the numbers of road accident. Do you agree or disagree with his idea?
The numbers of road accidents are growing around the world and these are becoming an issue. To forbid these issues, some people argue that the revising traffic laws are necessary so that any violation of traffic regulations can be heavily charged and which can reduce the traffic accidents. While I understand the necessity to control the driver’s driving habit, the resident’s backlash cannot be unavoidable. Therefore, the heavy fines should be imposed.
As the car accidents are surging at a rapid rate, approaches to solve these issues are required immediately. One of those approaches is the revising of fine systems so that any violation of traffic laws will be imposed of huge fines. This will put a halt to drivers to violate traffic regulations as they all will be scared of heavy fines. As a result of this, the number of car accidents will be reduced.
However, it cannot deny that unreasonable heavy fines can cause more crimes due to the public backlash. In the case of Singapore, for example, they have a strict rule and that binds every movement of people. As a result of that, it is common to see the suing between the citizens and the traffic polices. Therefore, the stronger rules and fines can push citizens to have a backlash for heavy fines.
It is fact that, the approaches to stop the car accidents because the number of car accident is growing every year as which death caused by road accidents is fatal. Therefore, the only solution to prevent this fatal road accident is imposing heavy fines to drivers for the violation of traffic laws. Even though the public backlash is unavoidable, the stricter rules are the only option to reduce the traffic accidents so that there will be no death from the road accidents.
In conclusion, the road accidents are the serious issue in the globe and which cases are increasing every year. Therefore, imposing of the heavy fines seem to be the only optimal and effective way to reduce the road accidents despite the public backlash.
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268229166667 0.247107183377 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.15625 0.155533422707 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0729166666667 0.0946595960268 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0286458333333 0.0501214627716 57% => OK
Pronouns: 0.015625 0.0437548338989 36% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111979166667 0.122226691241 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0390625 0.0403226058552 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.618755305 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0364583333333 0.0326793684256 112% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.1484375 0.0861772015684 172% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.03125 0.021408717616 146% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0078125 0.011925033212 66% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2009.0 1933.35771543 104% => OK
No of words: 342.0 316.048096192 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87426900585 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.345029239766 0.374742101984 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25730994152 0.28420135186 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172514619883 0.203846283523 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108187134503 0.137316102897 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.618755305 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.037074148 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447368421053 0.56093040696 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.1795486157 60.7387585426 74% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.1176470588 20.7743622355 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0905559753 49.517814964 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.176470588 127.492653851 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 20.7743622355 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.411764705882 0.814263465372 51% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 45.8486412109 49.1944974215 93% => OK
Elegance: 2.09090909091 1.69124875643 124% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474184221946 0.332605444948 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.134184953099 0.102741220458 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.091766866644 0.0668466124924 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.62399842199 0.534860350844 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.120278665481 0.148594505496 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226640361493 0.134430193775 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788421162317 0.0742795772207 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.429666061853 0.324371583561 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0958987357405 0.0638462369009 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.347595210924 0.228012699653 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593564110604 0.058150111329 102% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.68436873747 35% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 10.4468937876 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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