Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
As claimed in the statement that government has the responsibility to look over the development of the cities. Not only cities but also rural areas. To improve the country's capitalism, tourism and other welfare issues. Cities thrive is delineated by the sophisticated facilities and the facilities that mitigates the man's effort. For all these kinds of provisions we need a lot of financial support that are offered by Government itself. As it is the least responsibility of ruling authority to provide. These cities are the combination of anomalous culture, traditions high funds are made available.
Consider, the difference between the cities and rural areas. Many of them trying to vacate their shelter in the rural areas and becoming denizens of these cities due to lack of facilities available there. The way of leaving the countryside is nothing like deterrent but to make aware of the importance of the cities. Such government should look after these financial affairs regarding the development of cities. Moreover, capital cities occupies extremes positions in matter of facilities. Each and everything are available like high qualified Educational institutions, Hospitals , Business organizations, IT parks, Amusement parks etc.
Secondly, if we consider the rural areas they add aesthetic values to the country. Villages are the heart of the country. Bucolic areas add more beauty values to the place. So, it is the mere responsibility of the government even to look after the development of the rural areas. Now a days some of the ruling parties are discerned about the thrive of rural and remote areas and they are succeeding in it.
Conclusively, I would say that it is the mere authority of the Government to provide financial support to the cities. According to me elimination of financial crisis is also a root to the development of the cities. Even villages need to be taken care and developed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As claimed in the statement that governmen...
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Line 1, column 439, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... that are offered by Government itself. As it is the least responsibility of rulin...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...fied Educational institutions, Hospitals , Business organizations, IT parks, Amuse...
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Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...ter the development of the rural areas. Now a days some of the ruling parties are discerne...
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Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...the development of the rural areas. Now a days some of the ruling parties are discerne...
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Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...elopment of the rural areas. Now a days some of the ruling parties are discerned about the ...
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Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... the ruling parties are discerned about the thrive of rural and remote areas and they are ...
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Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...rovide financial support to the cities. According to me elimination of financial crisis is also...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275659824047 0.240241500013 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.149560117302 0.157235817809 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0762463343109 0.0880659088768 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0351906158358 0.0497285424764 71% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0381231671554 0.0444667217837 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114369501466 0.12292977631 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0410557184751 0.0406280797675 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.00211510593 2.79330140395 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0410557184751 0.030933414821 133% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.126099706745 0.0997080785238 126% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0058651026393 0.0249443105267 24% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00879765395894 0.0148568991511 59% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1913.0 2732.02544248 70% => OK
No of words: 310.0 452.878318584 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.17096774194 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.58838876751 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.383870967742 0.366273622748 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.303225806452 0.280924506359 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.225806451613 0.200843997647 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.183870967742 0.132149295362 139% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00211510593 2.79330140395 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 219.290929204 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503225806452 0.48968727796 103% => OK
Word variations: 50.7354354558 55.4138127331 92% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.7619047619 23.380412469 63% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3247201941 59.4972553346 53% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0952380952 141.124799967 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7619047619 23.380412469 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.674092028746 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.21349557522 153% => OK
Readability: 45.0844854071 51.4728631049 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.93421052632 1.64882698954 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302397678449 0.391690518653 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102422596799 0.123202303941 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0847354176814 0.077325440228 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.531100169021 0.547984918172 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.176857370728 0.149214159877 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131139614725 0.161403998019 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560259524454 0.0892212321368 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.54501685686 0.385218514788 141% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0448405951407 0.0692045440612 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244864541803 0.275328986314 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492759301713 0.0653680567796 75% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.