You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
. thank your friend for the holiday.
. explain that you left your wallet in their house.
. give them instructions of how to send it back to you.
Dear Nikhil,
Hope you are doing well. I reached back home safe and sound. I must thank you for lovely welcoming and memorable events during the last week. These memories will always rejuvenates me .
By mistake, during my visit I have left my wallet at your place. As I remember , lastly I had placed it in the Top drawer of guest room cupboard. I think you will be able to spot is easily as you aware , its of brown colour.
I need a favour from you. Request you to courier the wallet to my office address. Mainly my prime identification documents such as driving licence and PAN card are in the wallet. Hence I suggest to send via professional courier service only so I can get these documents early and safely. I have already enclosed my complete office address along with this letter for your ready reference.
My apology for inconvenience that I brought to you.
See you soon,
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
I think you will be able to spot is easily as you aware , its of brown colour.
I think you will be able to spot it easily as you are aware its brown colour.
flaws:
No. of Words: 159 250 //more content wanted
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 159 250
No. of Characters: 698 1500
No. of Different Words: 112 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.551 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.39 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.423 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 48 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 28 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 14 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 9 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 11.357 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.908 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.357 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.381 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.474 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.189 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 170, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'rejuvenate'
Suggestion: rejuvenate
...e last week. These memories will always rejuvenates me . By mistake, during my visit I hav...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hese memories will always rejuvenates me . By mistake, during my visit I have lef...
^^
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t my wallet at your place. As I remember , lastly I had placed it in the Top drawe...
^^
Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...l be able to spot is easily as you aware , its of brown colour. I need a favour f...
^^
Line 4, column 179, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...licence and PAN card are in the wallet. Hence I suggest to send via professional cour...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 187, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest sending'.
Suggestion: suggest sending
...and PAN card are in the wallet. Hence I suggest to send via professional courier service only s...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['hence', 'if', 'lastly', 'so', 'well', 'i think', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220338983051 0.220444632235 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.158192090395 0.167888034529 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0508474576271 0.0606518309736 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0734463276836 0.0506257000042 145% => OK
Pronouns: 0.169491525424 0.118615021944 143% => OK
Prepositions: 0.107344632768 0.107062808482 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0338983050847 0.041066498444 83% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50611202262 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0282485875706 0.0385302599488 73% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.045197740113 0.0714148451538 63% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0225988700565 0.0191574576366 118% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00930345855455 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 886.0 1141.60824742 78% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.134020619 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46913580247 5.53046319177 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78085437643 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.308641975309 0.284621296913 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.197530864198 0.211203875043 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0987654320988 0.133321485273 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0617283950617 0.0843313296314 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50611202262 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.703703703704 0.622163163488 113% => OK
Word variations: 76.1745396824 62.8969750728 121% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 12.9587628866 108% => OK
Sentence length: 11.5714285714 16.4300151701 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2265796001 44.7399317507 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.2857142857 90.9928171075 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.5714285714 16.4300151701 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.613754768223 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.09278350515 287% => OK
Readability: 31.3245149912 37.5504026743 83% => OK
Elegance: 0.901408450704 1.13073093955 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384002155229 0.331212695627 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0580012979238 0.0927372745006 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0512153320539 0.0736520305886 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.469393920489 0.579516596996 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.184826242049 0.180689518051 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128861172591 0.122183219658 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743326381128 0.0765303033291 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.168767326832 0.211926503985 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0529405323805 0.0737400523855 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227583259006 0.203819188451 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310853803905 0.067151250289 46% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.45360824742 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.48453608247 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.0206185567 99% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 1.03092783505 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.56701030928 39% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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