Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind that image.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
With the fast developing of our society, most modern people live a hectic life and normally don’t have time and patience to think things and other people deeply. Thus, they sometimes judge others by their appearances and equate appealing image with reality behind it. However, there’re still many fields that are based on the truth instead of good looking.
Admittedly, people in contemporary society tend to be superficial about things and others. For example, celebrities with fancy looking can always drive their fans crazy about them. Many people will support their idols indiscriminately, even if the celebrities behave ruthless or tell a lie to the public. This trend has lasted for years and it is extremely popular among young generations, and thereby it leads to the relentless pursuit of attractive appearances of the celebrities. Also some of them will risk their health or life to do cosmetic surgery or have medicine to prevent them from looking old.
However, the phenomenon in some specific areas doesn’t represent the overall conditions, and there’re still some fields which value the truth very much. For example, the medical industry has always been a place where scientists pursue the truth in order to save more people’s lives. Yoyo Tu, a Nobel Prize winner in medicine in 2015, invented the medicine to cue malaria. Before the invention of such a medicine, more than 50 percent of people in the world face the threat of malaria in their lives. Both Yoyo Tu and her medicine don’t have the appealing looking, but her pursuit of the truth leads to the great success to conquer one of the most severe diseases in our world.
In addition, the educational area is another example that the reality outweighs the attractive appearances. As we all know, schools are places where students come to acquire knowledge and skills in order to have a prospective future. The knowledge and skills can only be mastered through the relentless pursuing of the reality. If students in school spend too much in thinking how to make themselves more attractive, they may be left behind by their peers in academic work and thus be less competitive in the job market. In short words, only by mastering the truth of every subject they learn, they can have a successful career and life.
In sum, although there’re some domains that value appearances more than truth, many areas still maintain their traditions to put the truth in the first place. Therefore, I am optimistic about the pursuit of truth will continue to lead our society to the unremitting prosperity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ractive appearances of the celebrities. Also some of them will risk their health or ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in short', 'in the first place']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.251004016064 0.240241500013 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.13453815261 0.157235817809 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0763052208835 0.0880659088768 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0582329317269 0.0497285424764 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0502008032129 0.0444667217837 113% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114457831325 0.12292977631 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0281124497992 0.0406280797675 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74788109476 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0321285140562 0.030933414821 104% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0943775100402 0.0997080785238 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0140562248996 0.0249443105267 56% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0120481927711 0.0148568991511 81% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2602.0 2732.02544248 95% => OK
No of words: 428.0 452.878318584 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.07943925234 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.35046728972 0.366273622748 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.264018691589 0.280924506359 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.18691588785 0.200843997647 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116822429907 0.132149295362 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74788109476 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 219.290929204 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558411214953 0.48968727796 114% => OK
Word variations: 65.9925039857 55.4138127331 119% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.4 23.380412469 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7574037433 59.4972553346 55% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.1 141.124799967 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 23.380412469 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.674092028746 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 47.8018691589 51.4728631049 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.61983471074 1.64882698954 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392867547786 0.391690518653 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0964556221291 0.123202303941 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0639047720991 0.077325440228 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.541225690746 0.547984918172 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.121101898731 0.149214159877 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152048495169 0.161403998019 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572484276056 0.0892212321368 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.352796299141 0.385218514788 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0639894924322 0.0692045440612 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252549655248 0.275328986314 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480707871159 0.0653680567796 74% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.