I certainly agree to work slowly and make sure that everything is going well. Someone can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side. The explanations go as follows.
Firstly, it is more likely to learn more. Nowadays, the world changes very swiftly and all youngsters and olds experience a huge advancement and improvement in several fields of science and engineering including transportation, communication, health caring, and even artificial intelligence. Working slowly and grantee that all tasks are correct either gives worker more free time to be up to date with new invention and progress or assists them to see all hidden aspects of a duty. This would be a great opportunity to reach to a profound understanding toward the subjects and materials and also it is a key factor that can help employees to address or handle job difficulties or problems.
Furthermore, avoiding from psychological and physical problems is another noticeable reason. In workplace, all people ought to work hard enough or concentrate to fulfill their tasks correctly. Because of this, they would suffer a lot of stress, pressure, and anxiety. Based on a research, which has been carried out in Society Department of Utah University in 2016, the workers who work quickly are 20% more vulnerable or prone to the mental and physical problems like heart palpitation, hypertension, depression, and chronic daily headache compared with the people who work slowly.
Admittedly, there are some justifications by one who argues that working fast and risk making mistakes is better. Chiefly, folk should save more money and time. These days, all companies and factories try to compete with each other. In this competition process any time and money saving is worthwhile or valuable and can aid agencies to access to either a business success or an extreme interest rate. However, still I affirm that all workers and managers should work slowly and properly. Although working speedy has some benefits, once you work slow, all the time and money loss can be compensated by offering a new elegant product or work to the market. Besides, any risky mistake can destroy all those mentioned saving.
Due to the aforementioned ground, all adults and children should bear in mind that working slowly and grantee that all things are right is ideal. Participation of learning and healthiness are two prime and conspicuous reasons.
- TPO-24 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.Use specific reasons and examples 87
- TPO-30 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. Use spec 80
- TPO-33 - Integrated Writing Task Carved stone balls are a curious type of artifact found at a number of locations in Scotland. They date from the late Neolithic period, around 4,000 years ago. They are round in shape; they were carved from several types o 73
- TPO-19 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 69
- TPO-08 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 79
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 390 350
No. of Characters: 1962 1500
No. of Different Words: 239 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.444 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.031 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.798 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 147 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 109 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 70 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.923 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.3 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.271 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.502 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.045 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...er more free time to be up to date with new invention and progress or assists them to see all...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246543778802 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.154377880184 0.158761421928 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.073732718894 0.0866891130778 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0668202764977 0.046263068375 144% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0184331797235 0.0685040099705 27% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.0714285714286 0.118717715034 60% => OK
Participles: 0.036866359447 0.0351676179071 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89383029572 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.036866359447 0.0309702414327 119% => OK
Particles: 0.00230414746544 0.00188951952338 122% => OK
Determiners: 0.0944700460829 0.0887237588012 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0253456221198 0.0209618222197 121% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0115207373272 0.0139019557991 83% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2411.0 2387.08602151 101% => OK
No of words: 390.0 408.028673835 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.18205128205 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.382051282051 0.338922669872 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.3 0.251872472559 119% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.197435897436 0.174417080927 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128205128205 0.112833075102 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89383029572 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617948717949 0.524397521467 118% => OK
Word variations: 76.8926077718 59.2087087015 130% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.5 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.4989115566 48.84282405 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.55 120.699889404 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.55 0.644075263715 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 49.5 45.7405998639 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.48076923077 1.45489161554 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428961762864 0.300154397459 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0512307018405 0.103427244359 50% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0440109916147 0.0752933317313 58% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.487336737311 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.159241501908 0.151897553556 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149708636249 0.114077575197 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855368135901 0.0781384742642 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.326012019929 0.336927656856 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0387786855606 0.067059652881 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276479904447 0.210909579961 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370947534677 0.0618886996521 60% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
---------------------
Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.