"The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station. 'Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have canceled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand our coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs.'
The manager of the television station argue that, due to lack of the local news and meteriological news like weather forecasting, the number of the business advertise during the night time is cancealed by the clients. The memorandum of the station manager, additionally state that over the past year, the late night news programs has devoted increased time to national news, however, complaints received from clients or business person is increased, the number of the contract person is significantly decreased consequently affected the station revenue. The argument of the auther is primarily Achilles heels and do not provide concreit butress on his argument, so it is full of brass tracks, hence manager is unable to convience the advertising contract of the people and lack of researches on the field of corrlation between weather , local news and the national news.
At first, the manager did not provide adequate research in the field of the contracter psychology. for example, why the advertising in late- night are cancled? Is only national news are solely responsible for the curtails of the contract or other are responsible. if the time period of the local news and weather news are devoted to increased time what are evidence to support and gureentee ? Argument is unable to answer the question.
Additionally, manager is sound about whether another television station is started which is cheaper than his advertising rate and provide better facilities than his station.
He also fail to poin out the negative consequence of cut of the national news. for example if national news are cut, then people watch another television station for new while the viewer are decreased and the advertise is ineffective, which is harmful in business.
In conclusion, the manager would like to increase the revenue but, lack of the convencing power, facts and supporting ideas by which contract will be increased and significantly revenue is increased.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 555, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sequently affected the station revenue. The argument of the auther is primarily Ach...
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Line 1, column 746, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r is unable to convience the advertising contract of the people and lack of resea...
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Line 1, column 836, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the field of corrlation between weather , local news and the national news. A...
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Line 1, column 849, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... corrlation between weather , local news and the national news. At first, the ...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...the field of the contracter psychology. for example, why the advertising in late- n...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... the contract or other are responsible. if the time period of the local news and w...
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Line 6, column 9, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'fails'.
Suggestion: fails
... facilities than his station. He also fail to poin out the negative consequence of...
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Line 6, column 80, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...onsequence of cut of the national news. for example if national news are cut, then ...
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Line 6, column 206, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... new while the viewer are decreased and the advertise is ineffective, which is harmful in bus...
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Line 9, column 201, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and significantly revenue is increased.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'for example', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.294460641399 0.25644967241 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.160349854227 0.15541462614 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0816326530612 0.0836205057962 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0379008746356 0.0520304965353 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0145772594752 0.0272364105082 54% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128279883382 0.125424944231 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0437317784257 0.0416121511921 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86192545045 2.79052419416 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0233236151603 0.026700313972 87% => OK
Particles: 0.00291545189504 0.001811407834 161% => OK
Determiners: 0.110787172012 0.113004496875 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00583090379009 0.0255425247493 23% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0145772594752 0.0127820249294 114% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1963.0 2731.13054187 72% => OK
No of words: 315.0 446.07635468 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.23174603175 6.12365571057 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.57801047555 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.390476190476 0.378187486979 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.336507936508 0.287650121315 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.234920634921 0.208842608468 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136507936508 0.135150697306 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86192545045 2.79052419416 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 207.018472906 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501587301587 0.469332199767 107% => OK
Word variations: 50.7831051093 52.1807786196 97% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.039408867 60% => OK
Sentence length: 26.25 23.2022227129 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.3468283826 57.7814097925 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.583333333 141.986410481 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 23.2022227129 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.724660767414 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 3.58251231527 279% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 59.9007936508 51.9672348444 115% => OK
Elegance: 2.19178082192 1.8405768891 119% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.647173661914 0.441005458295 147% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.176144893868 0.135418324435 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.119506540582 0.0829849096947 144% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.722542623954 0.58762219726 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.190784381987 0.147661913831 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.319027346842 0.193483328276 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157606508796 0.0970749176394 162% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.271362901902 0.42659136922 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.216802995904 0.0774707102158 280% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.378302987552 0.312017818177 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.187191647837 0.0698173142475 268% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.33743842365 60% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.87684729064 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.82512315271 21% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 6.46551724138 77% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 5.36822660099 93% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 14.657635468 75% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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