Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little.
A nation is governed by its rules and regulation, not by the public opinion. These rule and regulations have come into existence through constant refining of norms and age-old traditions. In contemporary world, every nation has its own constitution from which they derive and understand difference between right and wrong. Popular opinion is sometimes ephemeral, formed by recent events; it can be easily twisted and deformed by certain factors in the society for their own good. Oftentimes, changes in archaic rules are opposed by majority and public opinion, but these changes are necessary to bring transformation in antediluvian suppression of minority and underprivileged.
For a nation to proliferate in right direction, a leader should be as such who could take firm and discerning decisions. These decisions should not be influenced by popular opinion but by the governing rules of the society. In India, after its independence, several traditional rules had to be scrapped off for holistic development, freedom and basic rights of every citizen. Being a Hindu dominated nation, it was hard for its leaders to bring change; cases of untouchability, gender discrimination, and concerns about safety and security of minority were ubiquitous. Strong actions were taken in the past, against the popular opinion, which has helped India to remain united amidst so much of difference.
One of the main problems of democracy is influence of majority in policy making. But to keep its integrity and security intact, it is of paramount importance to propose and pass bills which takes everyone in account. In US, there was popular believe that slavery should not be abolished, but Abraham Lincoln without giving up to the whims of general popular belief passed one of the greatest bills in American history.
Similarly, for conservation of wildlife and punishing offenders who are causing harm to environment by encroaching upon forest area, strict rules against the will of popular opinion has to be made. A community or certain individual cannot make it happen, as there is lot of resistance from general mass against such issues. However, the opponents of this contention would argue that if popular opinion is not taken care of then policies will not be beneficial for common mass. In general, policies should be made taking into consideration of general public as a whole including people from different caste, gender, and ethnicity; but these policies should not be influenced by majority.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 543, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ld be made taking into consideration of general public as a whole including people from differ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'similarly', 'so', 'then', 'as to', 'in fact', 'in general']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253393665158 0.240241500013 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.153846153846 0.157235817809 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.108597285068 0.0880659088768 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0316742081448 0.0497285424764 64% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0248868778281 0.0444667217837 56% => OK
Prepositions: 0.149321266968 0.12292977631 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0565610859729 0.0406280797675 139% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.92521094327 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0226244343891 0.030933414821 73% => OK
Particles: 0.00452488687783 0.0016655270985 272% => OK
Determiners: 0.0542986425339 0.0997080785238 54% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0248868778281 0.0249443105267 100% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0113122171946 0.0148568991511 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2507.0 2732.02544248 92% => OK
No of words: 397.0 452.878318584 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.31486146096 6.0361032391 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.430730478589 0.366273622748 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.335012594458 0.280924506359 119% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.214105793451 0.200843997647 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138539042821 0.132149295362 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92521094327 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 219.290929204 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566750629723 0.48968727796 116% => OK
Word variations: 66.006349674 55.4138127331 119% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 23.3529411765 23.380412469 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0723052196 59.4972553346 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.470588235 141.124799967 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3529411765 23.380412469 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.529411764706 0.674092028746 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 56.8542006223 51.4728631049 110% => OK
Elegance: 2.18279569892 1.64882698954 132% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257144444749 0.391690518653 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0885074830976 0.123202303941 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.030840783335 0.077325440228 40% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.522344329289 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0806677582647 0.149214159877 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107940666814 0.161403998019 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547136822319 0.0892212321368 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.389431748243 0.385218514788 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0239031664743 0.0692045440612 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182375149375 0.275328986314 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054844049024 0.0653680567796 84% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.