I certainly agree that successful people take risks and try new ways and situations. Someone can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side. The explanations go as follows.
Firstly, it is more likely to be up to date with modern technology. Nowadays, the world alters very quickly and humankind experiences a huge invention and advancement in several fields of science and engineering like transportation, communication, health caring, and artificial intelligence. Because of all these technical and theoretical improvements the ability of try new things is a necessary prerequisite to keep the pace with new progress and be successful. For instance, a youngster, who is computer engineer, needs to take the danger of losing money and works with marvelous and strange digital instruments such as smart phones and televisions.
Furthermore, finding a new innovative way or solution is another noticeable reason. These days, human encounter with different problems and difficulties such as air pollution, traffic, or physical and psychological illness. Try a new risky thing is a key factor that can contribute workers and managers to extend their horizon and find a new solution to address those mentioned obstacles and issues. Based on a research study, which has been carried out in Department of Society of Utah University in 2016, more than 90% of inventions and discoveries including typing machine, airplane, and camera are proposed by persons who are interested to experience new things.
Admittedly, there are some justifications by one who argues that successful men do what they already know. Chiefly, it helps someone to save time and succeed. These days, all people and companies compete with each other to make more money. In this competition world, any time saving can help somebody to gain more profit and extreme interest rate. However, still I affirm that successful adults and children attempt new things. Although doing what you previously know should save time, it is not grantee your success. Besides, all the time loss, for instance, will be compensated by testing new things and offering a new product to the market.
Due to aforementioned ground, all folk should bear in mind that people cannot be prosperous unless they take risk and get new experience. Participation of learning and creativity are two prime and conspicuous supports.
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Essay evaluation report
it is not grantee your success.
it is not going to grantee your success.
it will not grantee your success.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 376 350
No. of Characters: 1939 1500
No. of Different Words: 239 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.403 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.157 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.919 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 145 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 112 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 78 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 57 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.152 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.3 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.266 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.501 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.025 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovative'.
Suggestion: innovative
...televisions. Furthermore, finding a new innovative way or solution is another noticeable r...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'for instance', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.259433962264 0.229887763892 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.153301886792 0.158761421928 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110849056604 0.0866891130778 128% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0353773584906 0.046263068375 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0235849056604 0.0685040099705 34% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0872641509434 0.118717715034 74% => OK
Participles: 0.0283018867925 0.0351676179071 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.02301324826 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0283018867925 0.0309702414327 91% => OK
Particles: 0.00235849056604 0.00188951952338 125% => OK
Determiners: 0.0707547169811 0.0887237588012 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0165094339623 0.0209618222197 79% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0165094339623 0.0139019557991 119% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2377.0 2387.08602151 100% => OK
No of words: 376.0 408.028673835 92% => OK
Chars per words: 6.32180851064 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.393617021277 0.338922669872 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.316489361702 0.251872472559 126% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.234042553191 0.174417080927 134% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.167553191489 0.112833075102 148% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02301324826 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.524397521467 122% => OK
Word variations: 81.2448274089 59.2087087015 137% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.8 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3216655194 48.84282405 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.85 120.699889404 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.55 0.644075263715 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 50.4489361702 45.7405998639 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.76666666667 1.45489161554 121% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354205106231 0.300154397459 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0547229495973 0.103427244359 53% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0476748371505 0.0752933317313 63% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.481476355708 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142842625167 0.151897553556 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123714916528 0.114077575197 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548379572412 0.0781384742642 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.322781829476 0.336927656856 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0630246605421 0.067059652881 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223426852782 0.210909579961 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392089119566 0.0618886996521 63% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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