Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
We are living in the twenty-first century, where everyone has to work had to support his/her family. Then the question arises that, whether only three days a week is better or five days a week. Some may argue that three days a week is more enjoyable because it may give them additional free days to spend time with family and less stress. However, I believe that five days a week with shorter working hours are more enjoyable than three days a week with longer working hours. There are numerous reasons why I hold confidence on this opinion, and I would explore only a few in the following essay.
To begin with, working five days a week with shorter hours increase the productivity. The employee can finish his work efficiently without getting exhausted. As we all know, it is not possible to work continously for long hours without losing the concentration, and that has a negative impact on the productivity. Therefore it builds the stress and may lead to psychological problems also. For example, recently a study was conducted by an agency, where they have asked the question to the worker about the stress level during long working hours. This study concluded that the workers find it more challenging and stressful during long working hours than short working hour a day.
Secondly, if the employee works for five days, there are more chances of getting a promotion, because the company may prefer such employee who can work more days a week rather than those who are working only for three days a week. As everyone aware that for the managerial or supervisory role can be assigned to someone who is available for most of the time during the week, so chances of professional growth are bright. For instance, I work for five days a week for my multinational firm. One day our company got a project, which is to finish in a short time. So there was a challenge in front of the CEO, to whom to assign it. After considering all the option, he decided that it has to be given it to me rather that my senior colleague as he was working only for three days. So you can see, I was preferred over my senior because I was working more days, that makes the work enjoyable.
Finally, an individual can spend more quality time with the family, if he works for five days with shorter hours. If someone works for three days with extended hours, he may not be able to spend time with his family, because by the time he is back to home his kids and wife will be sleeping. Whereas the person who is working shorter hours a day can spend the evening with his family watching movies, shopping, etc. For example, as I work for less hour a day, I take my kids to movie, restaurants, parks. Last week I celebrated the birthday of my daughter Tiara with all her friends in the evening. If I am working for extended hours a day, I could not have celebrated her birthday. Whereas, my brother, Paryushan, who works only three days a week for long hours could not even attend the party.
In a nutshell, in my opinion, five days a week for shorter hours are more enjoyable as there will be lesser stress in the job with more chances of professional growth and a person can spend quality time with the family. I belive all these things makes the work more enjoyable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
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Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... a negative impact on the productivity. Therefore it builds the stress and may lead to ps...
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Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... and may lead to psychological problems also. For example, recently a study was cond...
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Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: ASK_THE_QUESTION[1]
Message: Use simply 'asked' instead.
Suggestion: asked
...conducted by an agency, where they have asked the question to the worker about the stress level du...
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Line 9, column 223, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...n spend quality time with the family. I belive all these things makes the work more enjoya...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'whereas', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in my opinion', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217257318952 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.151001540832 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0785824345146 0.0866891130778 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0462249614792 0.046263068375 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0693374422188 0.0685040099705 101% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127889060092 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0385208012327 0.0351676179071 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.46423296907 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0246533127889 0.0309702414327 80% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0986132511556 0.0887237588012 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0261941448382 0.0209618222197 125% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0169491525424 0.0139019557991 122% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3251.0 2387.08602151 136% => OK
No of words: 587.0 408.028673835 144% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53833049404 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9222030514 4.48200974243 110% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.282793867121 0.338922669872 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.21465076661 0.251872472559 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.124361158433 0.174417080927 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0732538330494 0.112833075102 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46423296907 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.400340715503 0.524397521467 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.5112655218 59.2087087015 80% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6684587814 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.7407407407 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7359571648 48.84282405 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.407407407 120.699889404 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7407407407 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.62962962963 0.644075263715 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 43.2058174017 45.7405998639 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.43930635838 1.45489161554 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.483839440317 0.300154397459 161% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.136905810707 0.103427244359 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0959015495238 0.0752933317313 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.485833967402 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142060614574 0.151897553556 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164631492958 0.114077575197 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632701337699 0.0781384742642 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.391401728264 0.336927656856 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0201975155774 0.067059652881 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316458688597 0.210909579961 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544838368775 0.0618886996521 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.6433691756 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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