Essay topics: for success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more imp than studying hard in school
Travel is a way for excitement and enjoyment and also that is best way to learn about culture and visit historical place. Personally, I rather agree with this statement, although I have only one experience in travel with a group led by a tour guide but I have great time there.
Travel with a group led by a tour guide might first seem expensive than travel lonely but travel with a group is more cost efficient and there are some reasons for this. Food and accommodation cost in travel with group are often less expensive than other types of travel. Tour leader know where has best and cheap quality but in alone travel people aren’t always aware about best and cheap place.
Traveling with tour guide is comfortable and member doesn’t concern about providing food and hotel or even finding places. Tour leader manage everything that group need them. There is a plan for travel with group before they start to travel and members are aware about program. People always have problem with travel stuff and they think to provide their own requirement and they cannot concentrate to traveling and they don’t enjoy from visiting new cities and places. This is probably would be boring and exhausting.
In addition, travel with tour guide is much exciting and people always are happy with group. There are often some funny persons in group and they make joke and fun. Also people in group travel can learn from each other. For instance people can learn fishing or new skills and this make them happy and content. Traveling with group is safe, especially in some location of the world. Risk of danger is always low for people in group traveling with tour guide.
The important aspect of traveling with tour guide is tour leader knowledge about all places and their history and a good tour leader can learn more information about those places, which is more important in historical places.
To put it in a nutshell, traveling with tour guide is so exciting, safe, comfortable and profitable. I think it makes great opportunity to people to learn and enjoy from travelling with group led by tour guide.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 60, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
... excitement and enjoyment and also that is best way to learn about culture and visit hi...
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Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ns in group and they make joke and fun. Also people in group travel can learn from e...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to fish'.
Suggestion: to fish
...ch other. For instance people can learn fishing or new skills and this make them happy ...
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Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ravelling with group led by tour guide.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'so', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255583126551 0.229887763892 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.14888337469 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.109181141439 0.0866891130778 126% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0570719602978 0.046263068375 123% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0372208436725 0.0685040099705 54% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124069478908 0.118717715034 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0322580645161 0.0351676179071 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.35950373019 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0173697270471 0.0309702414327 56% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0545905707196 0.0887237588012 62% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.014888337469 0.0209618222197 71% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00744416873449 0.0139019557991 54% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2114.0 2387.08602151 89% => OK
No of words: 363.0 408.028673835 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82369146006 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.300275482094 0.338922669872 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.170798898072 0.251872472559 68% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.126721763085 0.174417080927 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104683195592 0.112833075102 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35950373019 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443526170799 0.524397521467 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.6193609809 59.2087087015 77% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.1052631579 20.5533526081 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4025023592 48.84282405 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.263157895 120.699889404 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1052631579 20.5533526081 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.368421052632 0.644075263715 57% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 36.1851529651 45.7405998639 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.69387755102 1.45489161554 116% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166618494816 0.300154397459 56% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.140915570756 0.103427244359 136% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.107936562321 0.0752933317313 143% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.582693511013 0.497263757937 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.175065186113 0.151897553556 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804479489598 0.114077575197 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407950708781 0.0781384742642 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.33422235098 0.336927656856 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0836669119311 0.067059652881 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118806809901 0.210909579961 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327448693057 0.0618886996521 53% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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