You are renting a new apartment, but your family situation has changed recently. Write a letter to the real estate agency asking them to find a new accommodation, more suitable for your needs.
In your letter explain – your current family situation. What type of new accommodation do you require?
When do you need to move?
Dear Sir,
I am currently living in 43 sector two-bed room set on rent. I am writing to you to find a spacious rental accommodation, preferably three bed room set with attached washrooms.
There are total 5 members in my family including me, my wife, my parents and my son. From last three years, my son was in another city to complete her post-graduation course. Recently, he got very good job in Chandigarh, so he came back. As he has grown up now, we need more space in our house. Additionally, owing to his job, our family income has increased, so we can now afford larger house. So we require 3BHK apartment with attached washrooms with each bedroom. We are looking for such accommodation near 43 sector in the range of 30 to 35 thousand monthly rent.
We are planning to shift within next two months, so it would be appreciated if we could get aforementioned accommodation within this time period.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best Regards
Jagdeep Kaur.
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| 2018-12-29 | vinshu koul | 87 | view |
| 2016-11-10 | Jagdeep08 | 84 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'sector' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sectors'.
Suggestion: sectors
...ear Sir, I am currently living in 43 sector two bed room set on rent. I am writing ...
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Line 4, column 513, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'sector' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sectors'.
Suggestion: sectors
... looking for such accommodation near 43 sector in the range of 30 to 35 thousand month...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70114942529 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74650115521 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.718390804598 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1818145007 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1666666667 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0718403935878 0.216113520407 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.025363589668 0.0766984524023 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0229683231633 0.0603063233224 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0400086754911 0.12726935374 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290878240241 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.