Topic: some people think that the best way to gather information is through newspapers while others believe in other better ways. Discuss both of views.
The prevalent of varied kinds of media provides people with more opportunities to access information. Some people think that to explore information, human can make use of different means from television to the internet while others rest on newspapers reading as the most preferable method. My essay will discuss both ways.
On the one hand, newspapers have been employed for their comprehensiveness. It is true that only by flipping through several pages of printed newspapers is the general information captured from the life of a famous celebrity to the wars happening somewhere in the globe. Secondly, unlike the online news which caused sight-impaired problems, traditional newspapers might lessen this danger and can satisfy the busy readers. With the rat race life, hardly people immerse themselves in such thick books.
On the other hand, in the market-based economy, newspapers are considered as an useful tool for advertisements. It is claimed that celebrities can make their money to ask writer to present information which is advantageous and polishes their image despite their dearth of genuine talent. No sooner do I purchase a newspaper to read its appealing headlines than I feel deceived for its soulless such as absurd exaggeration the incident of explore or the money that a famous actor spent on charity. In addition, compared to television, newspapers are less attractive because of lacking visual effect and active images. If there is an earthquake occurring, people can know exactly the incident of its seriousness with children crying, thousands of buildings collapsing.
In conclusion, although it i
s undeniable the role of newspapers in daily life, there are many ways to collect information such as television, book or online news.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrity'.
Suggestion: celebrity
...information captured from the life of a famous celebrity to the wars happening somewhere in the ...
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Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...d economy, newspapers are considered as an useful tool for advertisements. It is c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, while, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32142857143 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98051495345 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639285714286 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1345828391 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.615384615 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210515023369 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675750215822 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556052281533 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100863448249 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759132419175 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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