migration has become more common in society. is it a positive or negative development. to what extend do you agree or disagree with migration.
Annually, promising lands of opportunities are witnessing the exodus of people from all walks of life. Some people believe that it creates golden chance for them to take off a new destiny, others claim that they have to suffer homesickness and brain-drain of their host country may become deteriorated. from my point of view, migration should be controlled.
To commence with, it is easy to understand why people may risk any effort and crossing thousands of miles through the hazardous border to reach a new paradise, because it bestows them a variety of benefits. First, their materialistic life will be changed for the better. It is obvious that no sooner do people live in a vibrant and cosmopolitan city than they are offered with more job opportunities and higher living standards, instead of burying themselves in heavy manual low-paid jobs, their creative business ideas can be taken off in such a favourable environment.Another feasible advantage is to satisfy their curiosity. Some individuals made a decision to start a new life from scratch in order to meet their burning desire to discover other cultures. In fact, starting a new life means an expanded adventures with a view to exploring extraordinary surroundings, sampling mouthwatering local cuisine and assimilating into a new culture.
Behind its pros, there are also drawbacks that immigrants should take into account. The most serious problem is culture shock. Their life may be in a hell when the feeling of frustration, cultural misunderstanding and language barriers become a daily headache. Even they refuse to come into contact with native people but are in favour of mixing with others from their country. Besides, if the trend of migrating becomes accelerated, brain-drain problem is inevitable. The USA for example, because of rewarding policies and equitable incentives from government, have attracted thousands of talents to devote their cognitive abilities and creativity for this nation, which makes American become the most influential and powerful country in the world in terms of economic and education. Sadly, developing counties, as a result, become deteriorated owing to insufficient outstanding people. This proves to have adverse effect on their home county.
In conclusion, migration results in both advantages and disadvantages. However, in order to stabilize the society and accelerate the globe, governments should impose stimulating policies to spur their citizens and curb the number of migrants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2113.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39030612245 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04545149911 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614795918367 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.815837843 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.388888889 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0855786838301 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273774514982 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270841728049 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0493515451663 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195389290024 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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