These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country and give your opinion.
There is no doubt that nowadays plenty of people chose to work or study abroad. While some people think that spending time on this can give many benefits, others deem that it is rather not efficient and only brings some difficulties in their live. In this essay, I will discuss both points and give my support to former view.
To begin, when people decide to move abroad, then inevitably they will face a problem of being alone far away from their families. This can bring a lot of stressful situations. To mention one of these situations, it can be said that if father of one family moved to the other country for work, then he probably will start to miss them, and especially worry about his children. As a result, all parties, father and his wife with children will be in strained time when anxiety keeps its presence inside whole family.
On the other hand, almost often people are moving to work in foreign country, because of economic situation in their country of origin. Thus they are forced to do so. However, the benefits of working abroad besides earning more money, may also give a valuable foreign work experience, which might be essential for employee’s next job. Moreover, the worker while he is engaged in his work, can also obtain some license certificates which will allow him to upgrade his skills. Furthermore, he can find a better job position, which probably will allow him to take his family to a new country for a new life.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that there are more benefits to study or work abroad, although it may be a difficult time for a person and his family to keep proximity for some period of time, however it most cases this hardship can be passed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, while, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66123778502 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41208235899 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583061889251 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8675700258 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.076923077 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291127134327 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965858010968 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558502814543 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180155106228 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040564044232 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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